All Comments on 'A Long Walk Home Ch. 13'

next chapter is finally here, cant wait to read it, im sure its awesome!!!!!!!!

Now just a mere week till chapter 14.... wonder if I can survive?

Great chapter, can't wait until the next one!

Awesome as ushe! Hehehe the taming of Freya! Not too much tho. Lol. She's feisty! I think she may be my fav female character in these stories. Now if Rayne can just get her head out of her ASS! lmao. Love ya Jaz!!!

I can't believe that nobody picked up on the coincidence that Gard tried to save a Vampire-Were child about the same time that Rayne was born!

They may be a little dense but you gotta love them anyway!

Oh I really can't wait for the time that Dayton begins to let Freya learn why he is doing what he does around her and for her, is there insurance on all the items in the house? If anyone can bring Rayne back I think it would be Day.

Great chap as always lady J :)

Now I check EVERY single day and not just once but it is a must just after midnight to make sure it doesn't post before I goto bed. I am truly liking the surprise and instant happy face I get when I see it posted. I have to add that I did very much appreciate the warning for page 3..I wasn't depressed as I expected it..LOL I love the new Freya, feisty but being kissed into submission...sigh. Great as always!

"It was so clearly a dismissal that she could only gape at him again in complete shock."

Don't know why... I just love it.

~TJ

this is an excellent story and i can not wait for the next chapter i love the way Dayton and Freya

Better go find Rayne!! I truly love this story as I have loved all of your stories!! Great writing never stop:_)

What the hell?! A one paragraph 3rd page?!

You are officially evil >.<

~hzl

another fab chapter, and one that didnt make me scream in frustration at the cliff hanger! Hehe! Being an aunty i think i most liked the little interlude with Liam, so sweet. thanks once again, im already looking forward to the next chapter :)

you are incredible. i've gone through all of the series in the span of a few days...or less :P and now i'm here. I was just working when I noticed the new chapter and I had to read. I hate being caught up because now i have to wait. thanks for the amazing stories. I recommended it to a friend. lol so awkward being like yeah...i got it off an erotic story site but whatever. your stories are worth it. :D

Keep up the amazing work. I don't know how you get the emotional stuff right. I can't do it in my writing. people haven't complained about it but reading your stories shows me what mine are lacking. maybe i can learn from you by reading more ;)

Or does the week seem longer these days while we are waiting for an other exciting chapter from you.

Every minute seems like an hour, every hour seems like a day and then joy of joys the chapter posts and we start all over again. Groan!!!

Love this chapter now comes the stress until the next one posts.

Another fabulous chapter again, and I love your memberpage picture, she is really lovely.

Anyway, keep up the excellent work!

Its so much better when you wait I swear.

Jaz have I ever said that your an evil person before, if not I just did. One moment I am fighting the sting of tears, then the next I'm on the edge of my seat.

Good lord your good at pulling those emotional strings, I feel like a damn marionette, except I cant find the strings lol.

Ok enough silly talk, the mate thing, well that blew me away. I'd put Day with someone else but to have him acknowledge and let go of his beloved mate... wow never saw that one coming.

Rain, I don't know what you got going for her, its hard for me to pick it out, your getting better at hiding your plot.

I also see that the mess of Rafe meeting Ankatrine is still very much up in the air.

Well that's all the brain can muster at this late hour, if I feel tickled I'll post again when I can be a bit more sharp on the details.

till then I eagerly await your next installment.

i'm addicted to your stories i've read them all... on the down side i keep staying up all night to finish. if you ever do a book i want a signed copy!

...but that's no surprise there, I've loved your vamps and weres from the very beginning!! I've got to hand it to Freya, she certainly has some spunk LOL. I can't wait to see how her mating to Dayton will play out...if it even does, of course. ;)

And Gard tracking Rayne? Now *that's* going to be one heck of a showdown, I believe...

To make it short, awesome chapter, great writing, and keep it coming!! =)

There's not much I can tell you that your other adoring fans haven't said yet. Brilliant as usual, I just can't get enough! Your stories are the highlight of my week! :)

Continue being extraordinary!

Eternal groupie Zooey :)

*giggles* and i actually did a lil happy dance around my apt when i seen this posted and thrilled with how things are going with Dayton and Freya, though i do have to giggle alot at Freya confusion why Day's touch calms her even when she wants to be irritated its just to cute for words..lol

Keep up the wonderful work hun.

Donna

Ooooh! How exciting! Now, to hunt down the little pussy and bring her back into the fold! Here kitty! Don't be afraid! Anyone got a ball of string?? LMAO !!!

This story makes you want to not stop reading. And the cliffhangers, ugh.

Once again you have delighted with another amazing chapter in this saga. I sate my thirst for another episode, and then you leave me waiting anxiously for the next!

I love the way you develop the characters and interweave their stories through the series, and can't wait to see what happens next...

i was so excited to see a new chapter and it definitely hit the spot! can't wait for the next!!

How you keep us hanging on. This was wonderful. I actually yelled out loud. I've never suffered an addiction but it can't be any worse than this waiting and checking thing I got going on with your stories.

You weave a marvelous tale my friend!

Frustratingly short, just a few more paragraphs would have rounded it out really nicely, but still very good.

Yeah my Freya is back! I loved the chapter and I am looking forward for when Freya struggels with the alpha bond directly after mating. This will be fun!

I really enjoy each of your characters and the development of their relationships with each other. Looking forward to learn what happens with Rayne. Dayton and Gard meeting should be interesting...

Jaz....this story just keeps getting better and better with each passing chapter!! I am on the edge of my seat, waiting to see what happens between Rayne/Gard and Dayton/Freya....plus the next story line of Queen Anekaterine and King Callain. Hmm...makes you wonder. :)

i am glad you are writing again. hahaha!

good chapter...i know you have more juicy details in the upcoming chapters. can't wait.

superb story telling as always. :)

I agree with Willieone. This is a fantastic story. I wait for the next one. I check everyday on the off chance you are ahead of schedule and check for your updates. So I guess the next chapter will primarily be Rayne/Gard. I can't wait.

I have read all of your stories on this site. I have enjoyed to a lot, the only thing that gets to me is the long wait. Besides that PLEASE keep on writting. it is a PLEASURE reading your work.

Your stories are to be savored!!!

Thank you so very much.

Honestly Jaz I don't know how you do it. Week after week you give me a chapter so full of life. I am honestly drawn to your characters and how they reflect real life situations.Everything from Nors being worried that Freya might get hurt again, to Dayton knowing he must go slow w/Freya to Rayne running from an unknown fear. It so mirrors conversations I've had w/friends that's it's almost scary. You truly bring "life" to your characters. I'd tell you I eagerly await your next update but you already know that.

HAHAHHAHAHA now I know what you meant. <3

this story is just getting better and better! But a week is too long to wait. It felt like forever! Have mercy and post some more soon-pleeeeaaaase!!!!!:)

Since reading the first eight chapters I've somehow managed to avoid checking twenty times a day for a new chapter. Today I was delighted to find five new ones; the last appeared as I read the other four. Reading this tale is a breif visit to a litetrotic heaven only to be plunged into the depths of despair at the end of each segment. I don't know how I can be expected to wait patiently for the next chapter but I'll do my best. Please put me out of my misery soon.

i've been checking every single day after school and i need more!!! update soon please!!!!

your stories are simply that amazing. I have truly just waited on each chapter (not patiently). I check the site at least once a day. i am enthralled.

I just cannot wait for another chapter. This story has me constantly watching and waiting for new chapter to read but I have learned to check the computer at least 2 to 4 times a week.

Okay Jaz I am jumping up and down this is a another thriller chapter and you said you were working on chapter 19!!! This means it is going to be another show stopping read. Thanks for always keeping me on my toes waiting for the next installment.

First of I love the interaction between Day and Freya, they are just to perfect for each other :)

Gard needs to get Rayne back!! that sneaky little panther

Jaz I <3 you! you are amazing :)

the title is an understatement but it works. Love the stories and can never wait well for the next!

Thanks

I love, love, love, love, love this story!!! And of course anything you write in general :) I'm already anxious for the next chapter, you're just so addictive!!!

Even though I edit these chapters for you, I re-read them when they post - yes I am a Jaz addict as much as the others who post. lol I so admire your work and I am truly blessed to be chosen to look over your work. I would like everyone to know that there is never very much that needs to be changed because you are such an excellent writer. A little punctuation here and there and once in a while a grammar change. Again, I thank you for the gift you have given me to proof read your work - I do not call it editing because there is so little that needs to be changed. hugs, Kate

Hey, what can I say, thanks for letting us know it was an overflow to page 3? That early warning helped some. Once again, positively loved the plot, especially the complete confusion Freya is experiencing now....lol. Sparks will fly when she realises what's going on. Right now I don't really care where the plot leads......am just happy that there's a chapter to read every week. I'm already stressing about what am going to read after this is done.....hope you're working on something already.....cause it'll be hard not refreshing ur page every 5 minutes and that is no lie. Thanks again JC.......u rock!!!!

Thanks, Jaz! This chapter is the best birthday gift ever right now!!!!!

I love Freya's confused reaction to Dayton - classic! But please, please, please let the next chapter be about Rayne and Gard 'cause dear sweet Jesus, that is one helluva hot vampire!

Love it, am waiting in anticipation for the next release - and your storys are always a lovely way to distract me from my own writing lol. Needless to say I should go bury myself back in my own story.

beautifully done i must say ,keep up the good work.

ps 6 days.

I wish I could ditto or push like for comments. I can only add my own, beautifully done and I look forward the coming chapters. As always Jaz you exceed expectations.

The dance between the two couples keeps getting more and more interesting. My congratulations to you and your editor I look forward to the next chapter ^_^ keep up the good writing.

I dont know what to say but, I just love your writting. JazCullen you are my new all time favorite and thurst for your next Chapter. I love how the story line just flows together leaving you engulphed. My friends and I find ourselves in deep discussions about which female of the pack we want to be...lol Thank you!

I normally don't read stories in the Nonhuman category. However, I must admit, you have me hooked. You weave a terrific tale of angst, love, happiness, and woe. I feel like I'm in the trenches with the characters in your story. I have read all of the stories you have posted and I think that this series is the best yet. Keep it coming. I can't wait until the next installment.

F. Thomas

After a 5 week hiatus (working in a country that does not allow literotica!) I have just caught up with this story......and wow! Love it! I love how Freya and Dayton have evolved and how Rayne has carried the story of the hybrids. Glad to be back, but already gutted I have to wait an entire week!!

I just get so excited when i see you have a new chapter up!! (Seriously Lit. I wouldn't mind having a notification system going on). But then I get all sad and hate it when I look to the side of my screen and see I'm towards the end haha. But then the cycle starts all over again when i see that bright yellow square with the "n" inside. (:

i enjoy the writing and imagination a lot. the way characters jump to exaggerated conclusions and go awol kinda sucks, pretty stupid for thousand year old beings ;)

Another AMAZING chapter! I could not wait to get home from work and get the kids fed and off to bed, so I could come and see what you had in store for us this week. And once again, you did not dissapoint. Keep them coming girl =) Oh, and get published soon so I can blow thru more of my hubbs money buying all your books lol

I really love your stories... Especially this series

There is so much substance and i love that. i read many stories that are so perdictable and vauge. i juts love this.

This is an absolutely fantastic series. I want to read more. I'm in love with the characters and the relationships. I don't want the story to end.

I think I get why Rayne is so scared of Caleb and Annie, but I'm not sure. Wouldn't it make sense for her to want to talk to them to find some answers. I probably missed something somewhere.

Anyway, great job! It will be very exciting when the next chapter arrives!

Okay. I can agree to that. Especially if you look like Day!

Great chapter MEJ but you cut it off too short. It's like you gave us a half glass full of cool water on a hot day in Vegas. Yes, it will cool us down but only for a little while. Please hurry with the next chapter please.

I really want Rayne to meet Caleb and Annie. She's powerful too and she shouldn't be so intimidated. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Woman did you say you "improved a lot". You should have said "Dear Jaz Junky, don't you know you can't beat a Jaz addiction. I perfected my sh*t, you will read it and be feenin for days. You know where to come for the good stuff."... or something like that, lol. Your handling of mutltiple characters is just masterful. The emotional depth is blowing me away. Glad I fell back into my addiction:-) It's good stuff when you thank the dealer! I eagerly wait for the next chapter.

Peace and joy,

Shell

I agree with Seeker71!! This is an addiction and you are the dealer!!!

Thanks again!!!

Try reading the stories by whitesabretooth

Love Day and Freya. Hopefully we'll get more of them soon.

I was gonna wait, and not comment. however i had to say how out of all your stories this is my favorite. i can't wait to read more, and see how everything works out.

I love your characters and your stories! I have read them all so far and adore them! they feel so real to me there is so much angst and emotion and turmoil! please hurry up and continue! I am eager to see what happens next especially to Dayton, Rayne and Gard although I love all your characters of course!

sincerely,

a forever fan

i want update nao! XD

have I read this much on screen. Eventually I give up and move on to something else. Your story has captivated me, I truly enjoy your character development and how you make the erotic components part of the story instead of making it all about them.

I cant wait to read more. This story is so very addictive. I can't stop reading. I hope rayne will realize that she belongs with the pack and with Gard and Day. She needs them all in her life.

You said exited.but I'm sure you meant excited

You omitted a space and used a period rather than a comma! Get a life and show some appreciation for the talent the author is freely sharing.

Rafe is how old ? 35 ? And there are vampires 2000 years old and Weres who are 10 times as old as he is. And he is the wise man ? I really dont know if I should be impressed or rather call bullshit on this ...

I'm a little bit confused with Rayne's masking/invisibility . . . Wasn't Rayne in Were form when Gard initially saw her in the tree?

Your stories are amazing . . . Every time a new chapter begins with a character shift, I'm disappointed for about 2 seconds, but then I'm fully captivated with the other characters that you previously forced me to love. I really hope you do publish this in the future. :)

Ever heard of the phrase "out of the mouths of babes"? Age doesn't automatically confer wisdom. Some young people I know show more logic and wisdom than several adults I have met. I have come to believe that the more compassionate a person is the more they consider what is best for all. Thus lending them a level of comprehension that is the foundation of true wisdom. I see many of these traits in Rafe. I have found these stories to be awesome and can't wait to read more. I truely believe Jaz has a wonderful insight into the human psychy.

I am 70 and I have many older aquiantenances who lack the wisdom of some of my 30 year old friends. There is some agreement between and wisdom as you have to be a little savvy to last this long. But I do know many older than myself who are still "babes in the woods." I believe wisdom comes from experiences that give one reason to put into the hearts and guts some of the things they know in there heads.

Lynn

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Title says it all.

Each chapter draws me to continue.Your story is wonderful! Thank you.