A very good start to what should become a series culminating with the son fucking all of his mom's holes turning her into a total cum slut. Keep writing. I will look forward to the next installment.
It was too short ! That was possibly the best first story I've ever read, you have to write a follow-up to it. But it will have to be good to beat that story. I am confident you will do it.
""It was too short ! That was possibly the best first story I've ever read""
This wasn't even the best story I've read in the last 10 minutes!! Just a WankFest. No characteristaion, no build up of seduction, just a short lazy 'hand job'. Guess the above comment came from the author :)
Don't give up the day job mate...
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Anonymous07/18/11
Pitiful
Only a muppet would see any merit in this load of implausible rubbish. Bearing in mind that all characters in stories on this site are supposed to be 18 and older, yet the central character in this is going through puberty???
I think the writer must be barely approaching puberty if he expects the reader to believe any mother would slap her son for daring to sneak up and grope her, and minutes later let him rip her nightie off and fuck her tits.
He'd be lucky to escape with his nuts intact.
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Anonymous10/03/12
Basically rape . . .
. . . and not particularly imaganitive at that. No stars.
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Anonymous10/22/12
Nice Story
I like short stories like this one. It kept my interest throughout. I like the fact it was written in the third person. Most of these stories are not.
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Anonymous03/19/13
"Her eyes were glued to Ryan's big, hard cock."
What "rape"? His mother's cunt was drooling as she watched her boy stroking his big stiff prick. This is an excellent story of hot motherfucking, by a gifted writer. Ryan's going to have free access to his mother's mommy-hole from now on. He'll be unloading his young balls and shooting great big twatfuls of creamy semen up the same cunt he came out of for years to come.
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Anonymous09/10/13
mum seethrough
I always grope my mum sometime she grope back she would say don't let your dad catch u doing that sooner or later I going to fuck her
English
Good Start
A very good start to what should become a series culminating with the son fucking all of his mom's holes turning her into a total cum slut. Keep writing. I will look forward to the next installment.
Mothers and sons make good masturbation material.
Loved IT
Looking forward to more !!!!
the best start
school party with son friends
Only One Complaint !
It was too short ! That was possibly the best first story I've ever read, you have to write a follow-up to it. But it will have to be good to beat that story. I am confident you will do it.
Very good
Just a little too short though.
Very erotic and visual makes reading the story enjoyable.
Thanks for the read.
great one
plz more :)
i love titty fuck
5/5
Good story!
Very wild characters!
What medication are you on???
""It was too short ! That was possibly the best first story I've ever read""
This wasn't even the best story I've read in the last 10 minutes!! Just a WankFest. No characteristaion, no build up of seduction, just a short lazy 'hand job'. Guess the above comment came from the author :)
Don't give up the day job mate...
Pitiful
Only a muppet would see any merit in this load of implausible rubbish. Bearing in mind that all characters in stories on this site are supposed to be 18 and older, yet the central character in this is going through puberty???
I think the writer must be barely approaching puberty if he expects the reader to believe any mother would slap her son for daring to sneak up and grope her, and minutes later let him rip her nightie off and fuck her tits.
He'd be lucky to escape with his nuts intact.
Basically rape . . .
. . . and not particularly imaganitive at that. No stars.
Nice Story
I like short stories like this one. It kept my interest throughout. I like the fact it was written in the third person. Most of these stories are not.
"Her eyes were glued to Ryan's big, hard cock."
What "rape"? His mother's cunt was drooling as she watched her boy stroking his big stiff prick. This is an excellent story of hot motherfucking, by a gifted writer. Ryan's going to have free access to his mother's mommy-hole from now on. He'll be unloading his young balls and shooting great big twatfuls of creamy semen up the same cunt he came out of for years to come.
mum seethrough
I always grope my mum sometime she grope back she would say don't let your dad catch u doing that sooner or later I going to fuck her
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