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by Anonymous04/05/11

Shitty writing

Your and you're are not the same. That indicates to me you paid no attention in English class. Spelling, punctuation, sentence structure -- it all needs lots of help.

Yeah, flame away. I post plenty here, so don't give me that shit. I just happen to be literate, unlike this doofus.

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