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via Feedback link. They are very extensive, but you are free to disregard any or all. You write well, even though this is a genre I don't ordinarily read and don't generally like. I can genuinely sympathize with ol' Steph, and she is a hottie for sure. Hal is more of a stereotype, and Mike is just cardboard; but that's all right for this genre, it's all about the ladies anyway. I'm sure the trolls will be in here blasting away, but fuck 'em if they can't take a joke. In any case, why do they read this stuff if they don't like it?
Pretty good
For some reason your writing is growing on me. Still a little fast paced and devoid of any details of the characters, but some humor here and there. I guess what I miss in your stories is the lack of passion, anger, happiness. It's all a narrative within a narrow range of emotion, so I read them and never get caught up in the tale.
Interesting.
Call it a 4-star. This story is not your usual fare (other than the category), but I rather liked the story. I didn't care much for the wife (the "fat cow"), but all in all, a decent piece of fiction.
Yuck - Yuck
Funny as hell...............
NOW!!!!!!!!
This is a JPB type of story!! Good read. (Thanks)
I like it !!
Good read and very enjoyable.Keepem comin.
Decent story ...
... but miserable people and situation. Jerry was an asshole and it looks like he was fucking around too. I kind of get why Stephanie stuck with him until she was working but after that why prolong the agony? Life is too short to live miserably unless you have to. At least she finally wised up. Was she a slut because she cheated? Yeah, a bit. But Jerry deserved it so who cares. It was probably a realistic story describing the crap in people's lives but not a happy story.
Fun read
I loved the "sag" a of The Fat Cow. She was a wonderful forthright character. One awful mistake this author made was not introducing the lead character by name. Her real name, Stephanie, was only mentioned once during the whole story by my calculation...and that was a third of the way through the story A very amateurish writing mistake. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this story.
been there
Nicely done. Such sad, shallow people. Authentic enough to bring back memories I would rather forget.
You know what they say about blind squirrels!
Well, you finally found one I guess. I gave it Five Stars; can you believe it???
A good story
I liked the way Bob made Stephanie a character that the reader could feel sympathy for, even though she was a cheating slut.
A nice storyline and a smooth flowing story.
Thanks for the read.
Nice story
But I wish there were characters once could actually like.
Excellent read to a well construed story.
Superbly written by a Master of the Craft. This is the reason why I like perusing this site, to rarely find a pearl such as this.
For once
a story from the woman's point of view. From the moral point of view Stephanie should have dumped Jerry before screwing around. The Hal, Mike and Gloria are just cheats.
OVERHEARD WORDS CAUSES WARS
do divorces seem different, TK U MLJ LV NV
You Know
Every character in this iale was a cheating asshole. All scumbags who should suffer in extreme pain with some form of a disease.
Well written. though.
What about the three kids?
With three kids she doesn't have a single second to play around. With no husband, she's buried. Anyone who thinks otherwise hasn't had kids. Did Jerry just completely leave his kids and have no contact? And didn't Jerry get rid of the fat cow and get a new, slim and trim model? Seems like they both lost. And mostly because they couldn't communicate worth a damn.
daddy dearest
Biology 100 Chapter I Page One: Sexual Reproduction is a crapshoot.
Sex of Fetus is determined by biological father's chromosomes. All eggs produced by biological females are female. Reproduction by parthenogenesis results in only female offspring, i.e. clones of the birth mother.
Reproduction by sexual fertilization by a males sperm will have either complete XX {female} chromosomes or incomplete XY {male} chromosomes or some indeterminate combination of both. You blindly place your bets and you whistle 'O Fortuna ' at the results. The indeterminate impuissant ones become anonymousie commentators.
And it is still the Females who suffer through the pregnancies and face death at every childbirth and the burdens of feeding the infants and raising the children.
If this is the Future, where the hell are the artificial wombs?
He'll still be happy he traded in a fat cow for a younger, prettier woman
Same old sorry story.
I THINK HE FORGOT ABOUT THE COW AND MILK SAGA
and the 2nd child takes 9 months, the 1st is a guess-timate. TK U MLJ LV NV
and you dear annony you turd you always rise to the story you say you hate
and yet you read it. I think and the rest of lit thinks you are a brain dead piece if shit! So to help offset your craziness I gave this a 5
A story about...
A woman being a woman, likely more truth here than not. When a man has a good woman, it is best to treat them right and take care of them, because like all promates, they will eventually find another.
Initially I Was Torn
I usually don't have much sympathy for cheaters, and feel that if their husband is so bad she should just leave, but Jerry was SUCH an ass that I figured, "What the Hell!" and as long as she kept it discreet (and by the way authors, that's the correct spelling, NOT discrete, which means "separate and distinct") and out of town she was entitled to some pleasure.
Then, when it turned out that he actually had been cheating on her, I went totally over to her side!
I think Jerry married a hottie
And she stayed a hottie. The next babies she had were twin boys. And then she had another son. Even after all those children she maintained her tight body and her love for Jerry . He had the life he had dreamed of after he got rid of the fat cow. I think after some time passed his fat cow returned to being a fat cow. Once a fatty, always a fatty. Well done Jerry, well done!!
a fat cow slut will soon revert to what she really is
a useless tramp whose best use is as a cum dumpster at a crack house
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