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Five.
I
gave it a 5, it is interesting more than most, poetry, I don't know.
Adding only I hope this is a literary fiction, if not I hope you beat it, 2,592 days, if you haven't already.
wonderful
narrative, I would have given it an E. I love the way you weave the small existence of human beings in with the enormity of space. I think this will go into my faves list. I was overwhelmed by the strength of this work. Excellent!
~maria
Love.......
love, LOVE this! Adding you to my faves too.
Tess + 5
very strong poem...wonderfully done. I enjoyed the way you connect your personal experience to the cosmos.
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