"My hobby/obsession, is bodybuilding and the results show on my 6'3 frame. This along with being blessed with a cock that would make a horse cry,"
At least make it somewhat believable (to start with anyway).
Start off by Landing in a space craft and put this story in Sci-Fi & Fantasy!
Mark
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Anonymous04/06/11
Too abrupt
and not believable in the least. I need at least a little story behind it, instead of "my aunt came by the house, said she heard I had a big cock, and so we fucked."
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Anonymous04/06/11
Poorly written
Please get an editor
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Anonymous04/06/11
PLEASE find an Editor
This applies to everyone who wants to submit a story. Trying to read past the poor grammar and syntax makes it difficult to appreciate the merits of the story.
It was a really good story but a little to rushed and next time please use spell check.
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Anonymous03/12/15
Why no more??
I didnt even see the first story coming to an early end never mind that there was not another chapter!
Me want!
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Anonymous07/28/15
what
You mean he does not fuck his mother also? You left a lot out the story is not finished Lt needs 2 or 3 more chapters. Its like running off a cliff not a good ending
English
Editor
Spell check, learn punctuation. Get a fucking editor or proof reader.
OH C'MON
"My hobby/obsession, is bodybuilding and the results show on my 6'3 frame. This along with being blessed with a cock that would make a horse cry,"
At least make it somewhat believable (to start with anyway).
Start off by Landing in a space craft and put this story in Sci-Fi & Fantasy!
Mark
Too abrupt
and not believable in the least. I need at least a little story behind it, instead of "my aunt came by the house, said she heard I had a big cock, and so we fucked."
Poorly written
Please get an editor
PLEASE find an Editor
This applies to everyone who wants to submit a story. Trying to read past the poor grammar and syntax makes it difficult to appreciate the merits of the story.
NO more
i gave up after the first sentence and from the other comments i wish you had too.please give up now
Not a bad story, but I suggest getting someone to double check your writing before submission. Spelling mistakes will take people out of the story.
Great start!
Story line has great potential, use Spell Check, editor wouldn't hurt, keep writing!!!
????????????
WTF is a "bit of a funny turn"?
QUOTATIONS
USE THEM
Spell Check
It was a really good story but a little to rushed and next time please use spell check.
Why no more??
I didnt even see the first story coming to an early end never mind that there was not another chapter!
Me want!
what
You mean he does not fuck his mother also? You left a lot out the story is not finished Lt needs 2 or 3 more chapters. Its like running off a cliff not a good ending
Ron. Texas
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
nice
continue..an auntie is prego
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