So before I voted I went to your Bio and read some more of your work. You are a very good writer and you make the story flow very smoothly.
I too would like to see more and I will continue to follow your stories.
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Anonymous04/07/11
this is a ripoff!
This story is either a ripoff or a remake of a nearly identical story on this site from 2002-2003. Everything is very familiar!
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Great Story
I enjoyed your story. I do see a second, third....aww heck, probably even a series of stories coming forth. Do not stop now !
Nice and hot.
This was a great story. I really liked the relationship between the three. Here's to more fun with the new neighbors.
more please
I agree, this could definitely be continued. Great story!
Awesome
Loved it hopefully there will be more of this story to Cummm !!!!!
Great!
Would love to see more of this story please!!
I LIKED YOUR STORY VERY MUCH
So before I voted I went to your Bio and read some more of your work. You are a very good writer and you make the story flow very smoothly.
I too would like to see more and I will continue to follow your stories.
this is a ripoff!
This story is either a ripoff or a remake of a nearly identical story on this site from 2002-2003. Everything is very familiar!
Very well written and a nice edit.
Smooth flowing along with having a good storyline to make the story very interesting.
Thanks for the good story .
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