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Cute and sexy little tale!
I really liked the whole seduction element of this story! A pretty young girl being seduced by an older woman who used to be her volleyball coach - I've always wondered how some of these female coaches felt about the hot little babes under their supervision, and what it would be like for them to hook up later on. Your writing style is very similar to my own - sweet and sexy! I like it!
I AGREE
i agree with Dumpington's review, this is a nice piece of seduction. The only point that disappoints me is how short the story is. Like all the stories of yours that i have read, they could easily extend for several more chapters. So please lets have some about your characters ..... pretty please?
Impressive as always
Kansas your works are always of great quality and true genius, the only disappointment with this one is the quantity is not there. Despite the fact that it is so short I love this story and have it bookmarked.
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I absolutely love all your works as they are delicious and brilliant, but I would appreciate something to do with a kidnapped teen, younger then twenty that can relate to your younger, submissive readers. I love everything you write but in the end the girl is always a willing sub, why don't you write one where she isn't willing until the point where her mistress sells her at an auction at a club and everyone 'tests her' in a room for like, twenty minutes before they bid on her, buy her, take her home and such. Maybe she could be less reluctant to them, and become a porn star in the end. I don't know, I just don't like the willingness of your characters sometimes. The rest is absolutely amassing, I must say.
Yummy
Such fun!
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