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who could ask for anything more

Glass of beer from a fancy tap

some Yuppie micro-brew

some good writin'

and a mystery at the end

A 5

Durn good poem, pardner.

Five.

I don't want to pick apart your very good poem, but how about this for the last line:

and cut short her hair

I meant:

and cut short your hair

(without the comma at the end)