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by Anonymous

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by bflagsst04/06/11

Sylvia Plath

wrote prose and poetry, but she didn't write prose-poetry, or just string together a bunch of Spam tags and stale images and call it a poem. 3/5

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by twelveoone04/06/11

Jeez

OMG, a comment from cult central. Back to poetry, if some of this wasn't so damn good, I would accuse you of hyperbole. Well it does come close.
how clever you are
manipulating
your grotesque mannequin
from your cold hole

A 5

See bflagssssst, these are the kinds of sounds you can get, by not
trying to write like Vaseline on glass.
actually bog, here you are beginning to sound like her
grin, look at me! look at me!
how dead I am

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by theognis04/06/11

*****

One suggested correction:

was death your curse


Five.

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