I'm getting some real good story ideas from you. Please keep these stories coming.
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Anonymous05/12/12
I detest ...
... any story that tries to pretend that the reader is/was an active participant.
I KNOW I was not, therefore the story carries not the slightest semblance of believability!
The first time I come across the word 'you' is the instant I stop reading.
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I'm getting some real good story ideas from you. Please keep these stories coming.
I detest ...
... any story that tries to pretend that the reader is/was an active participant.
I KNOW I was not, therefore the story carries not the slightest semblance of believability!
The first time I come across the word 'you' is the instant I stop reading.
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