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by LustforAlphas04/09/11

Beautiful

I loved it. You should do a sequel and have them marry and start a family. I know if you do, it would be just as great as this one was. Great job :)

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by Anonymous04/10/11

Formulaic and frankly boring.

3 stars.

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by Alpineskier11/14/11

Great!

In just two pages, you drew us into a story of sharing, belonging, that others cannot present in even ten pages. Thank you.

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