All Comments on 'Negative Space Ch. 04'

A beautiful birth scene and scorching inter-species sex. The vampire story at its best.

It seems almost vampire meets incubus meets human. Whatever mix you've got... it's very intriguing. I can't wait to find out where you take the story next.

I like the fact that you are honestly trying to make your story original. Although there have been vamp births before, the way you introduced and explained your version was really good. And Lana had some really hot sex, so what will happen next? Going to chapter 5 right now and finding out.