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A Mother & Son Matchmaker Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/09/11

Spell check isn't enough

Please, please, please find a proofreader.

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by shagalot04/09/11

it,s a story, not a manuscript

Why oh why do these so called readers remain anonymous
when they make these comments ,As far as i can see there is nothing wrong with this STORY it reads well to me,it makes sense ,it good wholesome fun ,its sexy , it has promise to make it a good series in the future , so please keep up the good work im looking forward to next chapter ;)

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by Anonymous04/10/11

Great story!

I'm puzzled why anybody is bitching about this story. Its different, erotic and ever so slightly kinky, none of that bad!

Continue on, I'm enjoying it enormously..............

With Regards

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by Anonymous04/10/11

Proffreading?

It's a good job shagalot is not a proofreader!!! A ',' in it's and spaces before punctuation in his criticism!

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by digdaddyrich04/18/11

Very fast moving story

I hope that he gets some of his mother's pussy soon.

Thanks

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by bigdaddyg12303/11/13

A Mother & Son Matchmaker Ch. 02

Oh that Marie what a fucking slut. And worse she's even corrupting her good friend into mimicking her own indiscretions and even tempting her friend into an incestual relationship with her son. Bet a "dollar to a doughnut" that Marie will entice her friend Hope to seduce Hope's son Josh.

Evil lurks behind the grimacing grin of mathmaker Marie!!

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by SouthLondoner06/04/13

Seriously, your work needs proofing.

This chapter, like Chapter One, was spoiled for me by so many missing and wrongly added words. Having 'spell-checker' wouldn't harm, either. The text is just too fractured for me to enjoy your story. Sorry. 2-stars :-(

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by Anonymous07/28/13

Awesome

Can't wait for Josh to get his Mom in bed!!

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by TSreader04/22/16

Very hot!

Love it!

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by MyHotSlutWife09/04/16

5*

Love it, love it, love it!

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