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The Boy from the Sea Ch. 01

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by nomoretears0004/13/11

Oh man...

Okay, you got me hooked LOL! That was absolutely fabulous, well written and man, I can't wait for the rest!!!

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by cannd04/13/11

You have me caught up too. Screw historical accuracy...you created a great place for the story to take place and it is so well-written. As someone who likes the fantasy genre I wonder if this boy is human. He's almost sounds like some type of fae. But i Know it's not in that genre. I look forward to Chris' story. You continue to amaze me with your scope of writing. You go from a hardcore story like 'poor simon' to a sweet story (so far) of shy jared to this historical romance type of piece. I really enjoy your work. can't wait for more!

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by amber131204/13/11

HOOKED

wonderful opening to the story and I was there stuff historical accuracy when the story is as good as this. cant wait for the next chapter.

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by talismania04/13/11

I love fantasy and this one promises to be a winner. Your characters have complexity and depth, as does your fanciful world-building. :)

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by Royaltee04/13/11

Hmmm

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by Anonymous04/22/11

liking this so far

cant wait to read more =]

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by lonesomedove6606/13/11

Interesting!!

Can't wait to read more...

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by Lavonya02/06/13

OH.............

This is FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
poor kid.............

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