by Cruel2BKind
Okay, you got me hooked LOL! That was absolutely fabulous, well written and man, I can't wait for the rest!!!
You have me caught up too. Screw historical accuracy...you created a great place for the story to take place and it is so well-written. As someone who likes the fantasy genre I wonder if this boy is human. He's almost sounds like some type of fae. But i Know it's not in that genre. I look forward to Chris' story. You continue to amaze me with your scope of writing. You go from a hardcore story like 'poor simon' to a sweet story (so far) of shy jared to this historical romance type of piece. I really enjoy your work. can't wait for more!
wonderful opening to the story and I was there stuff historical accuracy when the story is as good as this. cant wait for the next chapter.
I love fantasy and this one promises to be a winner. Your characters have complexity and depth, as does your fanciful world-building. :)
This is FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
poor kid.............