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Son of a Cuckold Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/16/11

EEEEEEK....

Dont forget GAY theme in your next submission description, please.
And i was thinking the son was going to take the Pimp down....

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by Anonymous04/16/11

some people write just to bug people

some people write just to bug people and you are one, NOBOBY COULD be as stupid as to post a story in the wrong genre you are either a very sick woman or a man even your own mother hates.

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by Anonymous04/16/11

Great Story

I think it is a great beginning and can not wait for the second part. We have so many married middle aged white women in our town being satisfied by black men it's incredible. I bet most of their husbands and kids know what mommy is doing. I think it's a mega trend we just have to get used to.

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by Anonymous04/16/11

You are really a fucked up sick freak. But it seems you are not the only one the previous poster is just as sick and twisted as you you are. And no I did not read all the story I skimmed through it. If I had read it all I would have puked. Next time put your shit in the FETISH section where it belongs.

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by Anonymous04/16/11

Ignore the haters

They spit out their nonsense right after cleaning up their cum-sprayed keyboards. I thought it was hot and hope you continue. Ignore the sick fucks who see the disclaimer at the beginning and read the story anyway. They get aroused, jack off and then feel guilty so they rip the author.

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by HeyAll04/16/11

Please...

Have the mom be forced to commit sex acts with her son.

I've said it before, that in terms of just the writing (regardless of subject matter), you're really one of the best writers on this site.

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by Phantom192504/16/11

Great premise, but..........

Where was the actual sex?

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by Anonymous04/16/11

What the fuck?

Was the narrartor 18 or 8 you fucktard? This piece of excrement would have been better off...NOT WRITTEN!!!!

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by kathy2b4604/16/11

she has had it now

she will always have to have black cock now

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by digdaddyrich04/16/11

Not to realistic

I think the storyline could be a little more real, as I don't think too many young men would be that humble and still hang around that town.

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by smalld6904/17/11

good story so far

I like the story so far and I hope you continue. It has 3 of my favorites themes, cuckold, interracial, and mother/son voyeur. Please continue and ignore the haters.

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by tcitalianguy04/17/11

Pure Racist Trash

I see that users like you are still painting the black man as superior when in fact they aren't. All men are equalized with a shotgun blast to the mouth.

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by BbwCupCake04/17/11

More more more

Please give me more!!!

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by Anonymous04/17/11

Rough black school boys

I can't wait till those rough black boys make your mom there white whore.The white bitch will have todress like a fuck slut an come down to the school an be passed around my all the rough angry gangniggers.Your mom will love all there black cum all over her white whore face.They will even make her dress in a thong bikkii an meet all the young black boys at school at the swimming pool in the hood. The young gangnigger will go crazy at the pool.They will be fighting over your hot white whore mom.

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by Anonymous04/17/11

Pretty Good.

Hey shem, I love stories with voyeur sons. It's very rare here so I encourage you to do more! You did an amazing job with this story so please do another like it. Keep up the great work! :)

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by Anonymous04/21/11

Cant wait for the next chapter

Great story so far! Love the wife being a dirty slut!

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by Anonymous06/10/11

Give Us More!

Don't be making us beg now. You're overdue for chapter two.

Great stuff.

Norm

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by Anonymous06/12/11

The Worst!

Perhaps you should be writing on the "cuckold" sites. I found no erotic attributes to this story. Written by a cuckold for cuckolds. In another word "sick"!

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by Anonymous07/12/11

Next chapter please!!

Keep it coming...

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by Anonymous10/02/11

SICK ASS TWISTED LOW-LIFE PERVERT!

This story is about as low as a human being can get! Why did you have add these low-life black characters in this as well? As a black man myself, I was really offended! But,fact is there is scum in every race. This story started out dirty,yet decent but it went from bad to worse when it ended with a gay scene. This writer should be shot!

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by Afooja10/20/11

Nice, moving story

Not all that erotic, but a very well-done story about everyone else having to pay for the asshole father's addiction. Would like to see the father further humiliated.

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by Anonymous12/28/11

Fabulous

Great stuff! Never mind the comments from the A-holes. There will always be idiots that feel authors should only write stories that appeal to them only. Any story that includes any taboo at all will piss someone off somewhere. Nothing would be written at all if some of these commenters had their way.

People! This is a porn story site. Read the stories that appeal to you and skip the rest. Not all stories will appeal to your particular fetish. What is "sick" to one porn reader is a turn-on to others. That's life. Live with it.

I think rude comments should be stricken from the site by management. Personally I only comment on stories I have enjoyed. If I don't like a story or think it a bit much for my tastes I just don't read that author again. That's the way it should work. Authors should be encouraged to post on this site.

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by jacksrev01/02/12

you should continue it, good story.

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by bradbishop08/14/12

Need a sequel

I'd like to have the boy watch his mother get face-fucked, raped, slapped around by a lot of men, whored out, made to dance naked and so on. He also should get opportunities to fuck her himself and pimp her out.

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by sexhol08/18/12

too good

this story is too good I demand that you write more :)

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by Anonymous01/25/13

What a sad story...

I was expecting the son to destroy the pimp with his fists. I was at least expecting him to jump right into the mom's room before anything happens and then and beat the fuck out of the pimp. I only read a bit. Holy shit, this story was so sad.
The story is about a confused and gay kid's defenseless father, who gets beaten by a pimp for not paying him up and knowing that his wife is getting raped. Seriously, there's not really any point to this story. It's just sad and pisses you off. If you can't feel sorry for not being able to help them, you're beyond inhuman.

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by Anonymous01/25/13

1*

Good? You got to be kidding.

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by Anonymous07/10/13

One of the worst.....

stories on this site. Just a disgusting story not worth the time spent writing or reading. Belongs under the "Trash Pile" category.

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by Anonymous07/23/13

Great Story - please write chapter 2 as soon as possible.

What a great story! Can't wait to hear more of what happens next. I hope that he becomes a cocksucker like his mother and the black boys tell uncle Bones and he starts to bring other black men over for both the mother and to use the son.
How fitting for the cuckold dad to see his own son sucking cock too.

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by Anonymous07/25/13

More?

I'd love to see where this story goes from here. It would be nice if you wrote more.

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by MarkBlack09/08/13

That's great!

Please, write continuation of fine history rather

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by Anonymous12/19/13

Great story

Chapter 2 should include a part where the black boys strip and beat the boy in front of his father unless his father accepts to fight the pimp which obvs the father will not do.

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by Anonymous01/31/14

I can tast the black cocks now and how sweet the cum would be. It would be nice for the guys to come to the house and father, son and mother all suck cock together, of corse the son should start cleaning his moms cunt.

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by Anonymous02/09/14

hot story

I hope you do wright more this is so hot I have jacked off to it many times I hope the boy and his dad have to take cocks just like his cock loving mom does. rough and hard

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by Anonymous06/03/15

TOTALLY EROTIC. EXCELLENT WRITING.

Admittedly i am a sick fuck (for lack of a politically correct term) but gor me this story deserves to be short listed for The Best in Voyeur Son category.
The other two contenders are At My Mothers Breast by showher & True Love Ch. 1 thru 3 by cuckoldtony.
I was a voyeur son just because i was that way (not because of a traumatic event).
My parents had a lot of friends & entertained a lot. When you are young & want to spy you can find out if your mom has a thing going on with one of the friends.
With a hindsight i am sure she was a flirt & a tease. I am sure she used a good oportunity when offered one. She was not a totally faithful wife but she loved my dad and my siblings and me.

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by Anonymous06/27/15

THE WIFE'S NAME IS MAUREEN: MOST MAUREENS I KNEW WERE REALLY ATTRACTIVE; EVEN THE WORST LOOKING ONES WERE ABSOLUTELY FUCKABLE

Maureen's character turns me on.
Her son endured too much for his young age.

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