Whatever else Mr Revel might have done he certainly didn't compose Ravel's Bolero:-)
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Anonymous04/12/11
Jesus Fucking H. Christ!
What an incredibly inane pile of flowery dribble.
And most of the (mostly run-on) sentences don't make any sense, except to who speak in strings of adjectives.
I actually didn't even glance past the first line until after seeing your comment. Mis-naming Ravel in the title didn't bode well, so I took a glance at the start to see if perhaps the the authoer had a character who reveled in his bolero, but alas, twas not to be.
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It's Ravel's Bolero
Whatever else Mr Revel might have done he certainly didn't compose Ravel's Bolero:-)
Jesus Fucking H. Christ!
What an incredibly inane pile of flowery dribble.
And most of the (mostly run-on) sentences don't make any sense, except to who speak in strings of adjectives.
That is not writing...
to the commenter referencing Jesus
your comment gave me a good laugh.. well done :)
I actually didn't even glance past the first line until after seeing your comment. Mis-naming Ravel in the title didn't bode well, so I took a glance at the start to see if perhaps the the authoer had a character who reveled in his bolero, but alas, twas not to be.
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