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by butters04/10/11

there's a sensuality included...

in this write that lifts it above plain porn and brings it into the realm of the erotic. you still flirt a little too heavily (imo) with the hackneyed phrases, but the focus on sensuality (with the sight-deprivation) fights to save this write.

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by twelveoone04/10/11

the short of it

Darkman comes off more as Dorkman, 4

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