A Long Walk Home Ch. 14

U are so killin me. I found you by accident last yr. when I was trying to click on another story. Ever since then I've been so hooked!!! Please hurry and post new chapters. Loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE

I agree with everybody else. Great chapter. Beings you said you have completed "A Long Walk Home" Does that mean you can post the last 6 chapters quicker than once a week and end the torture of we your devoted followers.

Congrats!

This is an amazing chapter. You write so quickly! Thank you! You intertwine the story threads so thoughtfully. This, however, is my favorite.

Stupendous!!!

And thats all Im gonna say about this chapter! Now hurry up with the next one!!! Your HHIC

Ah Haaaa!!!

So thank you for giving me my future daughter's name (il shala)....it's going to be Sarayne.....absolutely love it...maybe when she's 18 and if you decide to transpose this into a novel I'll give it to her as a gift. The first commentor couldnt have said it better....stupendous.....amaaaazzzzzing. So now that you've finished writing the remaining chapters...what say you post all of them and let's have a marathon till the end. I think everyone will agree with me on this one....the suspense is not nice...we're on heart attack street here right near hyperventilation lane which is close enough to death's door for me. I can't stand it lady......t h e r e s t o f t h e c h a p t e r s p l e a s e

worth the wait

. . . every time :)

Another -

great chapter. Good plot, good characters, and good emotions. Thanks!

Can't wait another week!

Please post the next chapter(s) ASAP!

continued.. i cant wait to read more

im going crazy thinking about what may happen. the plot that you've set up through the whole story is amazing and how all the stories are intertwinded keeps everything interesting.

stuning as usual

I have the best, most fantastic job in the world, editing for Jaz - because I get the stories first. It is a gift though and not a job. I am so blessed to be able to do it. All I can say to you all is hold on for the ride in the future chapters. I just finished editing the last chapter and was bawling like a baby for the first time in reading any of Jaz's work. I know you will all be as impressed as I am with the remaining chapters. God blessed us all when he gave Jaz the talent that she has and then blesses us again when she decided to share it all with us. Can you tell I am a number one Jaz addict??? - lol

arghhhh!!

more please more!!!......you are killing me here, needless to say it would be a sweet death ;)
great update as always jaz!!

umm

well done. now what?

DAD GUMMIT JAZZ!

what a place to stop!! Sigh, patience is a virtue, I have to keep reminding myself. What an amazing Story i just cant get enough!! I need more!! please!!! LOL

this whole series is killer more please

Loved it

as per usual:D
I usually check every week for future installments but now I think Im going to change my routine.
Im going to wait as long as I can to read your new chapters.
I dislike finishing the chapters so quickly and I keep wishing it was neverending.
Thanks Jazz for all your hard work.
And my thanks to your editor as well for keeping the fans happy.

dieing of suspense

^_^ love it, love it, love it. Another great chapter. though the suspenseful endings are killing me as i have to wait for the next one. This just affirms how good this series is. A pleasure to read as always and thank you for writing. ^_^

crying my eyes out

I loved this chapter

I feel so bad for Gard, I hope Rayne can work through this, you made me cry when you descriped her distress :'(
It's a great chapter! I really hope that someday you'll get to publish your work :)

OMG!! I love it!!!

Once, again, you have wrote another amazing chapter to this story!! I love that you added Annie/Caleb, Rayne/Gard and Dayton/Freya into it and made it start to come together. I sure wished you would publish your stories, as they are just completely outstanding, Jaz!!!!!!

i.....loved it!

I was scared at first when everyone was in this one, but you handled yourself very well. there was so much info, but everything was said. Grawesome!

"One kiss," he whispered

I loved that!!! Awesome story, can't wait for the next installment.

I just can't get enough

Wow... More More More PLEASE!!!!! I find myself looking every other day to find a new posting. I'm sure others agree this is just way to wonderful, I'll take reading a 7pager with "A Long Walk Home".

Intense.

Poor Gard. That's enough guilt for a lifetime. I hope forgiveness doesn't take too long in coming.

AMAZING!

So good! Can we PLEASE have a double week again???? Pretty PLEASE?

I keep rereading the chapters in the hopefully-not-too-vain hope that the next one will be out by the time I'm done....

Goddamit! Reading 14 chapters in one go spoiled me rotten and now i have to wait like everybody else ;( I tried to stay away until this series was completed but i just couldn't... like a true JazCullen hoar XD

I agree. I too tried to stay away until the end of this series...but I couldn't. I am now sitting here screaming in my head that he shouldn't have left her there. And that like everyone else I have to wait....and I am not patient!!! LOVED IT!!

As always you did a great job. Though I am behind on my chapters do to vacation, I will catch up very soon. I did enjoy my vacation but I missed your new chapters. I had to give all my time to the loving family. Now I'm back and ready to read, read, read.... Thanks for the great story. I really enjoyed it.

Damnit, AGAIN?

Damn you to hell, you rat-bastard of an evil author. You're making me cry again!

I agree

I agree with her your making me cry again too dammit what a great chapter. So many emotions.

Damn....You are amazing ! You can probably have your stories published . PLEASE...May we have some more !(._.)

Fuck jazz

you are EVIL you make people cry... EVIL! Lol anyway blew me away LOL
J@ckel Konsur

Hooked

I am reading your series in chronological order and I only have a couple more of this one and then Hearts of warriors. I guess I'll have to start back over again. I am definitely Hooked on your work. FanFuckingTastic!!!!

So sad right now....You are good at what you do. Can't wait to finish!!!!

AFTER THIS STORYLINE IT'S THE END!?????!!!!! Noooooooooo!!!

You're probably tired of this universe...take a vacation but DON'T LEAVE US!!!! Elves, Witches, Warlocks.....give us SOMETHING for 2013!!!! Sensai, you're THE MASTER!!!! Hang in there....It's YOUR UNIVERSE and I'm just a Peeping Tom passing through....give me a reason to stay!!!!! lol!!!

*****

just as good 2nd time around..

This keeps getting better and better

LOVE IT!
You are a brilliant author.

:-)

I thank whatever deity there is that I started reading this now rather than having to wait for each chapter. Being able to read each chapter back to back is a blessing!

Too Good!

I was so keen to get to the next chapter I almost forgot to give the 5 star rating - had to come back to this chapter to do it!

Really good heart-rending stuff!

I hope you can make enough from your writing to not be distracted by other work. Not just because you deserve to, but so you'll write more!

Your free stories on Literotica are greatly appreciated by this impoverished skinflint, but they're definitely good enough to be worth paying for!

So far so good. One question though...

And it's just a funny observation: when Rayne cut herself why would she need antibacterial wipes? I guess I never thought of these beings as prone to infection...like I said, it was more curiosity than critique or criticism.