All Comments on 'Jack's Women'

Where you go from here is up to you, like all things. He could be good he could be bad. What will you tell us about you by the direction you go, what you are or what you want to be or the fantasy?

You have talent and thank you for sharing with us.

Many thanks.

I think it needs a strong followup. Since it appears that the protagonist is now going to take over the deceased pimp's stable, then you need better descriptive sex.

yes you are really need to add to this please, i rather enjoyed what i read so far.

I hope you will be adding more to the story line.

Can't wait to see where you take this Story.

Keep Writing.

Good change of plants. Keep up this story. sqhead

And took only one page to do it.

A 5 star start.

Paul in Oklahoma