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Interesting plot line
Where you go from here is up to you, like all things. He could be good he could be bad. What will you tell us about you by the direction you go, what you are or what you want to be or the fantasy?
You have talent and thank you for sharing with us.
Many thanks.
A very good first effort...
I think it needs a strong followup. Since it appears that the protagonist is now going to take over the deceased pimp's stable, then you need better descriptive sex.
ohhh
yes you are really need to add to this please, i rather enjoyed what i read so far.
Very Good Read
I hope you will be adding more to the story line.
Like the Story
Can't wait to see where you take this Story.
Keep Writing.
GR8
Good change of plants. Keep up this story. sqhead
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