All Comments on 'Even Steven'

Hot story. We came out ahead too.

Loved it!!

Great story, but really it is a great start to a longer one too. Lots of characters with lots of hiddent kinks and desires. Please continue...who knows, the redhead and Andrea could end up with Kyle.

What excitement and fulfilment, great.

Except for the cum shot, it was extremely hot! It's one of the best I've come across. The build up and anticipation, especially during the eating out scenes, is amazing. Keep up the good work!

fucking story. Keep it up and firing.

Wow! Your writing is so smooth and polished. I love your reality.

This was great. I especially enjoyed How you were able to describe the sensations the characters were feeling. I could actually feel it myself.

Story was hot too! Thanks!

And fuck story.

This is a lovely romance story with excellent characters. It should have been much longer, and certainly warrants at least two sequels. Five stars.

Outstanding story with wonderful characters. Loved the plot.