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by Anonymous04/14/11

I really believe this had the potential to be a decent story. But I am not a fan of the diary entry format. It's too short, and this may sound ironic considering they're supposed to be diary entries, but impersonal. They're very straightforward, and kind of like first this happened, then this.. and so on. Try converting this ( and the first one ) into a prose format and I think it will be much more personal and amuch better story overall.

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