What else can I say, I enjoy about half of your stories, the other half totally piss me off, guess which half this is in. Fact is, you started us on a journey, a story, then you just drop it. Might seem "cute" to you, but for the reader it pretty much sucks.
Actually JPB, this seemed to be a complete story, although short. It told me all that I needed to know about who the people are and what and will happen. Sort of the five W's and the H of literotica stories.
You're doing it again Bob, never fails - you just can't help yourself!
He never cared for sharing her, period - by your own writing.
Did she accidentally leave her phone on by accident or on purpose - good question.
He is aroused, give us a break Bob, he doesn't go for this, she is served with divorce papers upon her return. She didn't discuss actually doing it with him and she pushed the fantasies. From your description of his thought process - this man wouldn't hurt her, he would just walk away, hurt, disappointed and telling her...enjoy, have a good time, I never said okay to sharing and I will not accept your dalliance or put up with a woman who cheated...fantasy is yours and so is the 'Reality' you created for yourself. Have a good life!
Anyway Bob, I know you don't give a damn, you write for yourself, have fun doing it and don't really care what we think.
Know, we do like your writing and enjoy your stories but why lower yourself to the level of writer in LW who present honest, confident men in their stories who end up being a wuss or wimp. C'mon Bob - you're better than that. If you want a guy to be a wimp, put it straight up.
Anyway, thanks for another shorty but goody...just disappointed at your final innuendo.
were hubby agreed to the sharing. He should just disapear with all there money and she if she agrees to that. This is just another JBP wimp story. Why does JBP hate men so much, is it because he is not one?
and Written. Unfortunately I have a strong negative reaction to the ending, but that is my problem. Why can't JPB put these things in the Voyeur category.
The story left too many options for the rest of the story.
The open ended story could have many ways to end, even for an old pervert like me to imagine.
Like all of Bob's work; it's well written and edited, but this time the storyline didn't complete what was started, or give the reader at least some guide lines in which to follow through to the finish.
... who has decided to do whatever she wants regardless of her husband's needs or wishes. He has tried to get along with her by role playing, etc. But she is too big a slut to stop it there. Too selfish. She is too busy loving herself to love her husband. As pointed out by others this isn't enough writing. A drive by story.
Whenever I see a new submission from JPB, the very first thing I do is to scroll to the end and look at the last couple paragraphs. If there's anything about some idiotic, hair-brained nincompoop enjoying his woman getting it on with some other dude, I immediately skip over it and go on.
There are many of Bob's stories that I enjoy, but his yarns about sharing are NOT in this group!
I think the word today is MANIPULATION.
She had already started the affair when they had the "fantasy" talk. She is just trying to twist him into letting her be a slut to everyone else. Hay maybe she can tie him to a chair and 10-20 guys can show him how to fuck her.
Story was short sweet and to the point. Typical of JPB endings (or lack there of) you get to fill in the end.
There is enough to construe wimp hood coming on.
p.s. hope the guy gets tested for STDs soon and who's kids are those anyway?? (Slut now always was a slut)
I think it would be a better story line (if leading into a part 2) if she did this intentionally to break the ice and let him know about her escapades.
The Utopians here here that bitch about STD's and find it deplorable that some marriages enjoy multiple partners really need to move on. It's a story, try poking around Incest if you want something to gripe about.
She is entitled to do with her body as she pleases and he is entitled to have someone he can trust - one of them has what they are entitled to -
Makes no difference if he could/would be willing to participate he never got the choice she is out - the fact that he was pretty dumb using that fantasy is simply unfortunate - not a license to cheat.
At the beginning you already described his as not having any fantasies and certainly not her fucking other men...it was her excitement and...
...The Call - I'm going to venture that it was her way of making it the right time so........
Married over twenty years, faithful, no interest ever in swinging and now she pulls this. Your story but this guy is going to pack and leave. He doesn't strike me as the overly angry and ugly type but rather - the common sense (but hurt - badly) kind of guy who is just going to go ahead, separate and divorce her. No conversation, just sign the papers and go and fuck all your buddies and oh yes - obviously - this was not anywhere near the first time.
English
2 paragraphs is not a story
you asshole
If it wasn't for the long introduction.....
This wouldn't even qualify for a flash story.
unfinished, incomplete,
What else can I say, I enjoy about half of your stories, the other half totally piss me off, guess which half this is in. Fact is, you started us on a journey, a story, then you just drop it. Might seem "cute" to you, but for the reader it pretty much sucks.
Pretty good
Actually JPB, this seemed to be a complete story, although short. It told me all that I needed to know about who the people are and what and will happen. Sort of the five W's and the H of literotica stories.
NOPE
You're doing it again Bob, never fails - you just can't help yourself!
He never cared for sharing her, period - by your own writing.
Did she accidentally leave her phone on by accident or on purpose - good question.
He is aroused, give us a break Bob, he doesn't go for this, she is served with divorce papers upon her return. She didn't discuss actually doing it with him and she pushed the fantasies. From your description of his thought process - this man wouldn't hurt her, he would just walk away, hurt, disappointed and telling her...enjoy, have a good time, I never said okay to sharing and I will not accept your dalliance or put up with a woman who cheated...fantasy is yours and so is the 'Reality' you created for yourself. Have a good life!
Anyway Bob, I know you don't give a damn, you write for yourself, have fun doing it and don't really care what we think.
Know, we do like your writing and enjoy your stories but why lower yourself to the level of writer in LW who present honest, confident men in their stories who end up being a wuss or wimp. C'mon Bob - you're better than that. If you want a guy to be a wimp, put it straight up.
Anyway, thanks for another shorty but goody...just disappointed at your final innuendo.
Story?
Where did it go?
odd....
why is it that most author think there readers are happy to see the wive/hubby fuck some one else and then have happy life??
may be in the usa.. but in pretty much any other nation it's a divorce.
also it was bit too short.
more like a flash back and then a jernal entry not a story.
oh well. nice charitiastion shame he change his tune to the opposite... which is odd.
oh well.
not your best but still very good al the same, but it left me asking far to many question.
I missed the part
were hubby agreed to the sharing. He should just disapear with all there money and she if she agrees to that. This is just another JBP wimp story. Why does JBP hate men so much, is it because he is not one?
Well Orchestrated
and Written. Unfortunately I have a strong negative reaction to the ending, but that is my problem. Why can't JPB put these things in the Voyeur category.
Really short
The story left too many options for the rest of the story.
The open ended story could have many ways to end, even for an old pervert like me to imagine.
Like all of Bob's work; it's well written and edited, but this time the storyline didn't complete what was started, or give the reader at least some guide lines in which to follow through to the finish.
Just another slut ....
... who has decided to do whatever she wants regardless of her husband's needs or wishes. He has tried to get along with her by role playing, etc. But she is too big a slut to stop it there. Too selfish. She is too busy loving herself to love her husband. As pointed out by others this isn't enough writing. A drive by story.
good...
Good, but way too short, guy. I like to get into your stories; but, didn't have a chance here. Good anyway.
Some good; some not so good
Whenever I see a new submission from JPB, the very first thing I do is to scroll to the end and look at the last couple paragraphs. If there's anything about some idiotic, hair-brained nincompoop enjoying his woman getting it on with some other dude, I immediately skip over it and go on.
There are many of Bob's stories that I enjoy, but his yarns about sharing are NOT in this group!
Bob!!!
Being Bob!!
Not much to say.
I think the word today is MANIPULATION.
She had already started the affair when they had the "fantasy" talk. She is just trying to twist him into letting her be a slut to everyone else. Hay maybe she can tie him to a chair and 10-20 guys can show him how to fuck her.
Story was short sweet and to the point. Typical of JPB endings (or lack there of) you get to fill in the end.
There is enough to construe wimp hood coming on.
p.s. hope the guy gets tested for STDs soon and who's kids are those anyway?? (Slut now always was a slut)
Great Ice Breaker
I think it would be a better story line (if leading into a part 2) if she did this intentionally to break the ice and let him know about her escapades.
The Utopians here here that bitch about STD's and find it deplorable that some marriages enjoy multiple partners really need to move on. It's a story, try poking around Incest if you want something to gripe about.
Well - Have a nice life -
She is entitled to do with her body as she pleases and he is entitled to have someone he can trust - one of them has what they are entitled to -
Makes no difference if he could/would be willing to participate he never got the choice she is out - the fact that he was pretty dumb using that fantasy is simply unfortunate - not a license to cheat.
Just my opinion,
Her way of telling you.....
you've been replaced. I hope you recorded the call. It will help you in the divorce.
Yet another unfinished story from Bob.
Damn
Fucking cheating whore. Divorce the cunt. You'll live longer.
ASK AND YOU WILL BE DECEIVED
don't ask and you will still be deceived, TK U MLJ LV NV
Nice Try JPB
At the beginning you already described his as not having any fantasies and certainly not her fucking other men...it was her excitement and...
...The Call - I'm going to venture that it was her way of making it the right time so........
Married over twenty years, faithful, no interest ever in swinging and now she pulls this. Your story but this guy is going to pack and leave. He doesn't strike me as the overly angry and ugly type but rather - the common sense (but hurt - badly) kind of guy who is just going to go ahead, separate and divorce her. No conversation, just sign the papers and go and fuck all your buddies and oh yes - obviously - this was not anywhere near the first time.
Good one JPB!
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