You turned it into a beautiful story.
“Maureen could see her daughter was tired and obviously preoccupied, certainly about the young man who'd just left, but she still needed to talk.” Hum, I think you meant to say “Andrea”!
how do you know when a story is Fckin Awesome..??? ..... when the critics have only the smallest of typo's and errors to complain about !!!
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You turned it into a beautiful story.
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“Maureen could see her daughter was tired and obviously preoccupied, certainly about the young man who'd just left, but she still needed to talk.”
Hum, I think you meant to say “Andrea”!
how do you know when a story is Fckin Awesome..???
.....
when the critics have only the smallest of typo's and errors to complain about !!!
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