All Comments on 'My Ex Girlfriends Mom'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
interesting

Thats why you never got in her panties it is definitely worth the wait (or is that weight)

tsadmirertsadmirerabout 13 years ago

nice start...now just keep it coming

the_apocalypsethe_apocalypseabout 13 years ago
great story

can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Damn, i hope this is a true story, i just shot a big load reading it, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
that was hot

bring in some kinky stuff into the story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Love this story

This is very hot. Well he be turned into a cross-dresser hummmmm

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

lucky boy. mmmmmmm

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Such a tease. got me hard and left me hanging.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
please continue

omg plz continue i wanna know what jill does to him i gotta know please continue this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Awesome!

Shemale fiction thats not 2 pages of a guy dressing up and then 1 paragraph of how he "feels like a woman"

No, down and dirty sex between a guy and a chick with a dick that knows how to use it! That is sexy! Will check back often to look for updates!

icarr757@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Write On!

So many possibilities to continue this story. They could be hotter than this first installment - and it WAS hot! The one comment about Bobby maybe being turned into a CD, TV or even a TS himself is VERY intriguing. Tell us, too, how Lana and Jill came to be who they are. Were they once father and son? Continue to let your imagination roam and gift us with more of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Wonderful

Please do not stop it is so wonderful and I am very curious to read what happens next.

Joanne

XOXOXO

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

WHAT A BIG SURPRISE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE STORY AND AT THE END SO YOU CAN WRITE A SEQUEL COME ON JILL

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERalmost 13 years ago
very hot

loved it gonna read pt 2 now

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Awwesome

Short simple sexy ... Thnx!!!

BimboBambiBimboBambialmost 13 years ago
Nice pace and action.

You opened the story well and moved everything along at a nice clip. Really enjoyed it and anxiously awaiting the next part in a minute .

terricdterricdover 12 years ago
more

I hope you intend to write more than 2 chapters! I want to read more and more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

so hot can't watefo the rest

exaucerexaucerabout 12 years ago
Excellent

Wish she were my girlfriend's mum. Really enjoyed your story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wow Great

Would love to have something like that

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERabout 11 years ago
loved it

that was great, sounds to be getting even better soon

animaluver40animaluver40over 10 years ago
Awesome great loved it

Wow what a great smoking hot story. More plleeaassee¡!!!!!!!!!!!!! Damn wish it was me mmmmmm

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Hot Damn

One of my favorite fantasies...... Keep em cumming.....

StryderryderStryderryderabout 10 years ago
Wonderful

What a great story, I can't wait to read the rest of them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
nice

nice curve ball

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Dating

I need to meet them, they could own me, and use me daily ! Love this story !

jojo9696jojo9696over 9 years ago
more

got a big hot wet juicy cock about to explode going straight to chapter 2 dont think i will reach the end

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
You got me!

Thanks for the story, and you got me too. But you have to finish it..

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
shemale.cocks lover

Absolutely wonderful storing...

my wife's mom is same wife

and found out same way now I'm addicted to shemale.cocks cok and love that shit

thanks mom n law love larry

Jenna2641Jenna2641over 8 years ago
Two Shemales ... Great Fantasy

Another great fantasy. After thinking about one cock, you have to imagine two. Wonderful. I am looking forward to the next two installments! Thanks for sharing your erotic imagination with us!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
nice6992

part one makes me want to suck her cock also my first cock Hmmmm

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
nice story

yes a lady I know ask me to watch her house I said yes well one day I was there and mow the lawn it toke me five hours when I was done I went in the house to shower while there she came home I came out just wrap in a towel when I saw her I told her I just finish you lawn and toke a shower she said that fine I hope you got clean clothes to wear I told her no well you do not want to put on dirty clothes let me find you some to wear I said that would be nice she ask even if women thing I said yes I wore panties before she just smile well she had me a pair of thong panties i put them on she walk behind me and slap my ass yes what a nice ass you have how you like your panties I love them it been a long time since I been in panties she toke my hand come let me put a dress and bra on you for fun i told her yes after I was dress then she toke a picture here now you have a picture you as a girl I walk over and kiss her and she kiss me back as she kiss me her hand went to my ass and she start to feel my ass and then kiss my neck she told me you want me to keep going I said yes miss she told me are you sure you want to feel like a girl I said yes make me your girl well after that she remove her dress and I saw her big man cock now my baby girly then I knew I was sucking her cock soon after that I was her bitch

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I I want someCUm to.

Why can't I ever find a HOT SHELLEY to take my cherry mangina.

SissyCarla4USissyCarla4Uover 7 years ago
Awesome story Can't wait for more

I loved this story and can't wait for more

VanesVanesover 7 years ago
Great Story

This is a great story. It has gotten me so hot, I can't wait any longer to read Chapter 2. Going to it right now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
great story

I am a sissy and would love meeting a mother and daughter like these two lovely ladies. My Mouth and ass would belong to them.

Tootight1Tootight1almost 7 years ago
loved it

We never know what we leave behind in life. At least he got to find out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
10 is my lucky number

God I wish it was my ass taking in her cock, I was so hard I came with her thinking she was right here with me. I want more.

lingerie65lingerie65over 6 years ago
I'm all theirs

How hot, now if only that was me, all in sexy virgen white lingerie and come fuck me high heels. Being fucked by both at the same time..

spankmeaginspankmeaginalmost 6 years ago
Two good to be tru!

You won the quenelle!

Wish I was there for clean up!

Bottoms up

spankmeagin.

cdCindy1cdCindy1over 5 years ago
fantastic story

I'm a sissy cocksucking CD and I'd love to hook up with a well-hung shemale. Feed my mouth and fuck my man-pussy. I can't wait until the real thing happens. I also look forward to reading the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Omg! Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lana really liked how Bobby sucked her big dick. Chapter 2 could include her fucking his tight asshole. So amazing to find that your ex-girlfriend's mom is a shemale!! I wonder if Jill is just like her mom. Maybe that's why Bobby didn't get far with her sexually. Then, when Jill showed up and complained that her mom didn't wait for her before beginning, my cock throbbed again, thinking, 'Wow, two beautiful women!! I wonder if Jill has a surprise package too?' He sure was lucky to run into Lana. Aren't shemales wonderfully sexy and arousing? Mmmmm, I love ❤️ ❤️ 'em. A sweet cock and a tight asshole to fuck. 69ing fun with them too.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

find_two2@hotmail.com

.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

hope this story has a ending

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More, please!

smoothed273smoothed273about 1 year ago

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Please, Finish with another chapter..1🍆😈👅

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

You write like you knew you wanted to suck some shemale cock. Why would he not have known his “girlfriend” was sporting a boner? As for the next chapter, I suspect he will be taking and giving.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

What is it with these unrealistic ridiculous 10” cocks? Lets have some realism in these stories rather than circus sized dicks.

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