All Comments on 'By the End of the Week'

Nice pace and lots of detail, but really needs a proofreader for spelling and syntax and to weed out the "you"s which you replaced with you...

This teacher was too easy. Will Amy get a dare?? What other devilry can these two get into??

More??

thanks for commenting! not sure i follow you, though. what problems were there with syntax/spelling? also, what is the problem re: a "you" ? i did a ctrl+f for every instance of "you" and so no problems.

Never happened to me! Good story. Thank you