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by softsmile04/12/11

Good Machinations

I bleed, you bleed,
if one of us bleeds,
we all bleed?

Deep thoughts! Your poem brings up (to me) questions of freewill and environmental conditioning. As such, my brain hurts now. :)

In a philosophodazical (my new word) frame of mind,
~softsmile

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