by silkstockingslover
Hot story full of erotic writing. The subject? bullshit. Next time put this type of story in the BDSM section where it belongs. 1 star for bullshit and wrong section.
Don't know why this person has their knickers in a knot! This is a hot story and could be classified as Lesbian and/or Bondage. Keep up the good work!
Rambled a bit in parts but overall very good, perhaps trim it down a little bit to tighten up the story but very good job - very hot, 5 stars
Loved reading this. Would like the "story" on Bree turning her mother into her slave and sex toy. Also, how about Katherine and Nadine's time together. And don't forget Ms. Martens.
Great story. You remind me of PHOENIXARROW or CACTUS JUGGLER.
good story but you have other stories just as good are better you need to finish i hate authors who start good stories and never finish are take to long you forget the story but you are the best story writer i have read in a long long time
This was a good story, but you have shown you are much better. For me your Babysitter series was much hotter. In those the desire was hotter and intense, in this one the milf spent too much time attempting to make decisions.
You're still one of my favorite authors and at your best when things are intense. For me this one simmered and never came to a boil.
I look forward to the next.
some of this reminds me of what a milf seductress I know used to do...great story
Your writing keeps getting better and better. My favorite part of this was the use of the other submissives to break down the will of the mother. Just the show of futility in defiance I think added a great undertone to the seduction. I look forward to more chapters...of the choices given the judge and turning the tables would be my choices.
I do definitely agree with others though on completing other storylines as well. Your "submission" series left a few open ends to say the least...governor, the mothers adversarial lawyer amongsth them. Look forward to seeing you revisit that.
love the dirty talk and the teen making the mother repeat to her that yes i am a slut , you own me im your bitch.
your story had my cock so hard. i was leaking pre cum like crazy. i love the part when she showed her the pic of her on the cell phone. and she could only wonder how many others had seen her pic. of her in the miths of a hot orgasm. her becoming a slut slave for bree. i also love the part about bree mother using her. it was a perfect fall to a wonderful new hot slutty life. having to betray her husband. having to fuck other men. and be a total slave the rest of her life to a kinky hot young mistress.
but the best part is knowing that silkstalkings is realing getting off on writting this story. knowing her pussy is hot wishing this would happen to her. knowing that she would love to submitt to some of her own hot sexy students. how she would love to be blackmailed and forced to submitt to some hot kinky student. have some sexy student suduce her and and take some pics of her and blackmail her into more and more kinky situations. dam im hard again at the thought. i love your mind. your the best sub writter i no. thanks your stories are the best. i do hope you get off to your own stories.
I just couldn't get over all the other subs coming to the teacher and her reactions and final submission. HOT HOT HOT
~~J
now that was very hot please tell us more about them all the other teacher about what happen with Joan tell us how did the husband take it and did some of his friends from work join in with them all and about the two other young ladies that she was going to join in with tell us some crazy places that where there have pick up other woman at and how did it happen with them and who was there to and there ages ok thanks
your stories got me interested in lesbian stories! I can't give a higher compliment than that.
Keep it up!
I'd love to read about the seduction of Ms Martens, the judge, the sorority momma, the cop, the pop star and how Bree got the tickets, but mostly I want to read about Bree's mother and how that power struggle came out! I hope you intend to write that first but whatever you write in whatever order will be great, I think.
This sort of a story where the characters almost immediately drop into a submissive role and then start using the expression "mistress" aren't normally my thing but you weave such an intriguing network of depraved characters that I find it easy to switch off my "reality-filter" and go with the flow, which leads to another sort of flow and ...
... a five-star rating!
R.
I would love to read about Ms. Martens, and all your other conquest!!!
I would love to read all suggestions u made at the end of the story! This story got me extremely horny! KEEP ON WRITING :-)
Would love to read about the cop and turning the tables on the mother, particularly like the domination of one dominant by another, along with dominating taller women this is what I enjoy most especially with a little bondage thrown in
great story realy got me hot. would love to know if you got the next door nieghboure
I cum at least 1 time per page..that story was HOT. I just wanna know if you got the black female attorney neighbor. And how did the husband take the news when he found out?
This whole story is fantastic. Hope you write one about the black attorney neighbor,but have it so she makes sure that Nadine is het personal property and allows nobody to have her but herself, Here takes a fall and can only have that fat dude and nobody else ever for punishment for disobeying Carrie.
this story was very sexy. i would love to hear more of the things that bree made nadine do. and also the one with ms martens sounds like it would be an amazing story. well im off to go read your other milf seductress stories lol
fingering my wet cunt reading this cunt licking story. i had cum all over my fingers and kept sucking the sweet juices off my pussy, wanting more and more.
Can't get enough of your Dom/sub stories. Would love to be dominated. Well maybe some day. Just keep passing on your great stories, Jasmine. Gerry
Quite fantastic! A very good flow of erotic fiction. Enjoyed it very much. Thank you!
great story, your stories always get me off.
I'd love to hear about the cop one... ;)
no one can write like you. you build up the lesbian submission part so carefully. i have never read anything more erotic than your stories. if i ever make a lesbian porn film i will come to you for the rights of this one. you are a mind blowing genius. hats off.
I have been reading these stories for about 12 years; and this is one of the best, if not THE BEST ever. I love the way you bring them all into your web and they all end up loving their position, between the legs of you or the person you want them to be in between. Great stories; keep them cumming!
I wish it would continue and love that Bree had to serve her mother
Thank you so much for having your slut write her story for us. Great story, and such a great ending! This has to be one of the top stories on Lterotica.
First, on this particular storyline, I would love to hear more about Bree and Carrie. I personally don't think she should turn the tables; rather, she should try, and end up failing. And some, though not all, of her own subs, should witness her submission to her mother. That would be a great process, her own mother domming her in front of her subs, when the occasion warrants. In a broader context, I read your missive on sequels. I understand your thought process, but here's what I'm hoping for. Most, though not all, of your characters end up at Le Chateau at some point. It only stands to reason they would run into each more frequently than the couple incidental meetings you have mentioned. Therefore, most of these doms have probably interacted. What I would like is to see a queen annointed, so to speak. In any hierarchy, there can only be one true top dog. I would like to see some of the lesser doms fall to the greater ones, and in a competition type atmosphere, one winner. Not a silly wrestling battle royal type deal, with everyone in a dom dyke pile. More like, well well, Carrie you dommed me, but you couldn't dom Daphne Green. Or Daphne you dommed Carrie, but bet you couldn't get Amber. Whoever you choose to win though. Oh, in an aside, please let's hear more about Governor Green and her daughter.---Jedd
I would love to be my Mums slave and let her fuck me. I would like to taste her pussy and bottom. xx Lynn
I want to say I enjoy your story as I`m a stepmother and my stepson and his fiance have controlled me for 3 years now.I am 43 and thought I was in control of my life until I married Rick. Barry and Ashley have made me there personal fuck toy and of late with with Barry`s job I have been Ashley`s slut. I have been degraded,fucked,put on display,cummed on and used however she wants.I`ve eating more pussy then some guys.I was recently taken to an adult toy party where I was made to lay on the floor and masturbate and fuck my cunt and ass with a dildo, then when I recovered from that I had to please any women still there. So this story makes my pussy wet.
Once again, this was by far an incredible story. You are my favorite writer. I hope the statement made "Like mother, like daughter" is an indication that a sequel to the same story title will soon be here. Great story!
It's the 3rd or 4th story I read and it is soo good, all kind of stuff that gets me horny. You're doing a very fine job.
Unbelievable is a understatement. Why would a forty some married woman allow any of this to happen. Why would a forty some married woman allow for her daughter to be humiliated by a eighteen year old girl? How gullible do you think that we are?
This is just a lot of bullshit and has no credibility or reason to be on this site.
Never stop writing your stories. Your gifted for sure
Easily one of the best stories I've read!!!
Going to read more, keep it up(know pun intended) lol
I finally got around to start reading this series. This is one of your earlier works and I think that they are not at the same mark at what your work is now. It really shows how much your writing has evolved over time as I read most of your recent work. But none the less, I liked this story. Looking forward to reading the other chapters now!
Even as a work of fiction this is unbelievable. Absolutely dreadful.
Very Good Read!!! I will read it again. Keep up the good work.
Wonderful the whole way through loved the way you had Carrie keep Bree in her place in the last scene.
You always throw in an unexpected but delicious twists!!!!!!!!
Billebert
You are my favorite author. I give all your stories 5 stars. However, this one is too long, boring, and I got the impression "self-service or aggrandizing". Too bad.
Jas:
I love the dynamic between the two pairs of Moms and daughters. Obviously they are quite different but you weave the descent of Nadine into the dynamic so well by letting us have a peek into her reservations about submitting to Bree. I am so interested to follow Bree as she progresses on her path of domination and hopefully her submission as well.
The exercise of Carrie’s domination over Bree is so delicious and well demonstrates a nice hierarchy of Dommes. Bringing in the incest between Carrie and Bree to continue the family tradition is simply divine and adds a delightful layer to the story and paints a superb mental picture of the young domme being thoroughly and completely dominated by her Mom, as needed.
Thanks for another great episode of Bree's story. I am really beginning to know her. With your writing skill I do expect some exciting and unexpected twists. Write on!
Another best in class story. Don’t know how you do it. But it’s sexy and loved the rough sex and control. All the more real and humiliating.
As usual, another class and hot story with combination of rough sex, control, submission and humiliation.
I loved the dynamism between the two pairs of Moms and daughters – Carrie & Bree; Bree & Nadine. Added to it introduction of sex toys. In reality, I was aroused and was soooo hot throughout reading the story (means I wish to read this story again and again).
Nope. Just not a good story after Bree’s mother started teaching her to not use punishment as much. Yet, Bree berates Nadine, calls her cunt old and shriveled, calls her shocking names (in Nadine’s mind). And she threatens Nadine into action by using Nadine’s daughter to get what she wants. A very bad story with NO show of Bree learning anything from her mother.
This one is not as good as the other Bree stories sorry Jasmine I stopped reading halfway through I just lost interest and I never do that in your stories
315. I like all these submittal stories except I prefer less forceful methods. I also wonder about all the orgasms, never a problem with having an orgasm when they are trying. My experience is that the girls/women almost never get off and surely not multiple times.
Excellent as always and as usual.
Two minor details for constructive criticism: You mentioned Kim was "tutoring" Bree in math in this story but it was French in LMS:Pre-MILF. Also, you mentioned in LMS:Mom that Carrie had trained Bree not to use threats to have women submit to her, but Bree made several threats in this story.
Other than those discrepancies, I loved reading this following chapter! Onto the next one!