Fucking My Wife -- Behind My Back! Ch. 01

Needs to be longer.

It reads like a JPB story. He has several like this one. You may want to check out the various paths he takes the husband down. That is not to say you can't be original, but it may inspire some ideas.

and?

and he does nothing?
please if the story is another wimp shit story... stop writing.
revenge or divorce... is the only way .... to him.

and he is still standing in doorway..

shit take pics find a good lawyer n sue the company...seems to me with 16 men in there n ones his boss. i do believe i can see his retirement in his future...and at no cost to him other thyan getting rid of a cheating wife...after what he just saw who would want to fuck her again any way...that bitch would be loaded with disease...as for her well id tell her she could stay with me but not as my wife and with me only as her pimp....thing is now though hell have to find some new customers for her as all the ones she has now will be in severe trouble...and her days of giving it away nope..now its 100 a fuck 50 a bj n 500 for her ass and 2000 a night for a gang bang ..shit id make her into a party favor ...that plus his millions in settlement now he can find a nice wife n now will never have to work again thanks to that stupid wife n boss

cockold to dumb to sue

revenge and pain for all involved.

If part 2 includes the husband getting total revenge on all involved, it could be okay.

If he's a cuck looking for creampie, then....

Great

Waiting for next chapter

Can't really rate this a story yet...

Too much unknown to know if this is going to be a story. If the husband just goes along to get along, then no story at all. If turns into a happy, wimpy cuckold, then I'll stop reading. It he gets some balls and confronts his wife and co-workers, then you will have a story I can rate. So we'll see what happens.

Okay

Wifes a tramp but the Boss is doing his wife you would think he would want to get Evidence and Get Boss and any others including the Tramp to Humiliate and make them Pay cash or Divorce or Both. Not to include breaking Knee Caps.

Now the real question!

What is hubby going to do about his wife. Sadly he is the butt of many jokes of his workmates and especially his boss. The wife has no respect for him and probably never has. She doesn't want anything from her hubby except for him to provide for her and he gets nothing in return. They have been married for four years and she acts like the virgin and is repulse from trying anything but missionary. Further more they sleep in separate bedrooms and he gets no sex from his wife. Sound like he has a roommate and with no benefits. It doesn't sound from the start of chapter 1 that he has any gonads unless he now wakes up and realizes that he is being made to look like a fool and cuckold and talked about by everyone. Nice tale and interested to see which path it takes. Thanks for sharing.

Forget the english teachers remarks

They never hear the pain in your words, please continue this tale, as it has a lot of potential for violence and revenge, as well as erotic confrontation. After all that is part of what this site is all about.

I just hope this isn't a wimp story

If he gets revenge then it will be a good story

Not Bad

I knew that you would get comments on your introduction. They are right. Women cheat just as much as men now. That womens lib thing really took off didn't it? It is extremely odd that he masturbates in the bathroom at work. In the shower would be more realistic. I doubt that most people could pull it off at work. You could say that he simply overheard a conversation. It makes our hero look a bit off. You could have cut down on the sex scene a little and added a few more facts or details to make it more interesting. More detail would make the reader connect with the main character better. Of course I'm not a writer.

Whore

Fucking cheating slut. I hope she chokes on a load and dies,

HA

Random disloyalty

fat cock smoked, cornholed to high heaven, betrayed!

so long baby

pack her things and drop them off for the next, changing the financials etc of course

what a bitch.

Cool

Can't give a lower star rating

Hurry up with chapter 02