All Comments on 'Call This the World'

I gave you a 5, you can delete the comment, if you wish. From here on out I am just sampling , you just got lucky.

What I can call it is rather pointless, as I am capable of

"And it is there to fill a hole in yours"

doing it myself, or digging one if you prefer.

I find the slighting aggrieved indifference to the reader annoying. The poem, is not about you, it is for the reader.

Now here is what is good; the last two lines do a nice turn.