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by bulltlr04/13/11

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OUCH!!

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by PoetGuy04/13/11

Interesting.

The imagery is kind of creepy, but certainly vivid and the closing is quite good. Poet Guy does not understand why the poem is centered--that seems to be just affectation to him--and "alabaster" is perhaps too stale in this context to be effective. Overall, quite interesting.

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