...but isn't 'pervert' one op those labels that could quite easily be tagged to any of us here? Just a thought, and it might be a way of humiliating the lucky - sorry - poor devil even more.
Good writing - 5 *s and my sincere thanks; ther will be more, I hope...
Maybe overuse of the word, I agree, I don't think the other 2 parts use it as much, but maybe so. I've already submitted all 3 parts so they should be coming out soon.
For anyone interested, these stories that I post, are stories I write for my wife when I am on the road. It keeps things interesting for us after 20+ years of marriage. I just thought I would share some with you guys since I have been coming here for years.
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Anonymous03/15/13
After the first smack
Stand up and throw the bitch out the door. She has no respect for you and her behavior tells you so. She earned her divorce. Give it to her.
English
Nice start
A very nice start - I look forward to reading more.
It is your story, so of course your decision, but do you think Liz has to keep calling him a "pervert?"
Nice...
...but isn't 'pervert' one op those labels that could quite easily be tagged to any of us here? Just a thought, and it might be a way of humiliating the lucky - sorry - poor devil even more.
Good writing - 5 *s and my sincere thanks; ther will be more, I hope...
"pervert"
Maybe overuse of the word, I agree, I don't think the other 2 parts use it as much, but maybe so. I've already submitted all 3 parts so they should be coming out soon.
For anyone interested, these stories that I post, are stories I write for my wife when I am on the road. It keeps things interesting for us after 20+ years of marriage. I just thought I would share some with you guys since I have been coming here for years.
After the first smack
Stand up and throw the bitch out the door. She has no respect for you and her behavior tells you so. She earned her divorce. Give it to her.
Great Beginning
but, really, why not make it one story?
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