The word 'sight' refers to something you see with your eyes, whereas 'site' is typically used in reference to a construction location. You also have several redundancies, making it confusing and distracting for your reader. Please, please make sure to edit before you publish; it will make all the difference in the world! Had it been edited, it would have been a good story.
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Anonymous04/17/11
Thank you hon for writing a story about a *true* threesome. I just adore men who likes sucking cock just as much as they like eating pussy. I loved it. It wouldn't hurt to have an editor proof it, but it was very enjoyable. Keep it up!
Very hot story! I agree that it was great to see the two men enjoy each other as well as the woman. Thanks for writing!
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Anonymous04/18/11
AMEN!!!
You hit the nail on the head - Literotica needs a section specific to bisexual stories - and this one is a winner! As a married man who loves a big cock in my mouth just as much as my wife loves watching it, I am pleased to see an author who shares a desire to write in this genre - very pleasent read!
As I am reading this I have my cock in a soft rubber tube encased with a nylon stocking, slowly jacking it while I read, its all wet now. I sure would love to have this come true for me. I love to suck cock, and be fucked in the ass, I also love to suck on a pussy thats just been fucked.
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Anonymous03/19/12
side by side
neither ahead nor behind, neither above nor below, coupling and joining in blissful union, what could be better? True bisexuality captured in a well written story that leaves me hard and wanting more! Thanks for sharing!
I LOVED THIS STORY!!! REMINDS ME OF THE TIMES I SERVICED MANY BLACK COUPLES... AS A WHITE BI SEXUAL MALE I ALWAYS ENJOYED PLEASING BLACK MEN IN PRISON.. NOW FREE I FOUND MANY BLACK COUPLES WHO WANTED A WHITE MAN TO SERVICE BOTH OF THEM... SUCKING BLACK COCKS WHILE THE BLACK WIFE WATCHED TOTALLY TURNED ME ON AND HER HUSBAND TOO... SUCKING HIS SUPERIOR BLACK COCK GOT ME HOT TO SWALLOW HIS FRESH CUM DOWN MY WHITE THROAT... I'M NOW A SERIOUS WHITE SISSY FOR ANY BLACK COUPLE WHO WANT A WHITE SISSY TO PLEASE THEM... SEE: TVSALLY692 FUCK BOY...... GOOGLE THAT !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous04/12/14
Great story
Love all of that but would like him to fuck my ass too, plenty of lubrication then a long slow fucking with the wife stroking our cocks. ahh!
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Anonymous08/07/15
Wow!
Awesome story. I would love for an experience like that with another couple, they wouldn't have to be interracial but that would be fine with me.
English
excellent
Get an editor
The word 'sight' refers to something you see with your eyes, whereas 'site' is typically used in reference to a construction location. You also have several redundancies, making it confusing and distracting for your reader. Please, please make sure to edit before you publish; it will make all the difference in the world! Had it been edited, it would have been a good story.
Thank you hon for writing a story about a *true* threesome. I just adore men who likes sucking cock just as much as they like eating pussy. I loved it. It wouldn't hurt to have an editor proof it, but it was very enjoyable. Keep it up!
Good start. Tell us about more of their escapades together.
Very nice
Very hot story! I agree that it was great to see the two men enjoy each other as well as the woman. Thanks for writing!
AMEN!!!
You hit the nail on the head - Literotica needs a section specific to bisexual stories - and this one is a winner! As a married man who loves a big cock in my mouth just as much as my wife loves watching it, I am pleased to see an author who shares a desire to write in this genre - very pleasent read!
Wonderful
As I am reading this I have my cock in a soft rubber tube encased with a nylon stocking, slowly jacking it while I read, its all wet now. I sure would love to have this come true for me. I love to suck cock, and be fucked in the ass, I also love to suck on a pussy thats just been fucked.
side by side
neither ahead nor behind, neither above nor below, coupling and joining in blissful union, what could be better? True bisexuality captured in a well written story that leaves me hard and wanting more! Thanks for sharing!
So hot! A real fantasy of mine too!
HOT story !
WHITE SISSY SERVICING BLACK COUPLE..
I LOVED THIS STORY!!! REMINDS ME OF THE TIMES I SERVICED MANY BLACK COUPLES... AS A WHITE BI SEXUAL MALE I ALWAYS ENJOYED PLEASING BLACK MEN IN PRISON.. NOW FREE I FOUND MANY BLACK COUPLES WHO WANTED A WHITE MAN TO SERVICE BOTH OF THEM... SUCKING BLACK COCKS WHILE THE BLACK WIFE WATCHED TOTALLY TURNED ME ON AND HER HUSBAND TOO... SUCKING HIS SUPERIOR BLACK COCK GOT ME HOT TO SWALLOW HIS FRESH CUM DOWN MY WHITE THROAT... I'M NOW A SERIOUS WHITE SISSY FOR ANY BLACK COUPLE WHO WANT A WHITE SISSY TO PLEASE THEM... SEE: TVSALLY692 FUCK BOY...... GOOGLE THAT !!!!!!!!!!!!
Great story
Love all of that but would like him to fuck my ass too, plenty of lubrication then a long slow fucking with the wife stroking our cocks. ahh!
Wow!
Awesome story. I would love for an experience like that with another couple, they wouldn't have to be interracial but that would be fine with me.
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