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On we go
This is completely unbelievable
Overboard?
Interesting turn. Since Jeff had already planned for going to school the rest of the semester, what will he do now? Why do I have a feeling he will try to go to class just as often, but teach instead?
If it is worth doing, it is worth overdoing.
Another great chapter.
59 CHAPTERS???????
59 CHAPTERS IS MORE THAN MORE REGULAR AWARD WINNING BOOKS!!!! Need to compress story and eliminate the unnecessary verbage and 'fluff'!
Good
Ignore the bit about 59 chapters, if they don't like it let them eat cake. Sorry, always wanted to say that! It is long and the chapters short, but with a few exceptions (ch 58 comes to mind) it remains interesting and fun. I do like this young couple you have created, and Ashley is turning out to be "quite the girl" isn't she!
Consolidate chapters
I agree that short chapters are a nuisance, it isn't worth clicking and read only a few paragraphs.
the answer to short chapters
use your heads. either bookmark the writer to you computer, or add him to the list of favorites. then you can read a bunch of chapters at once.
all this gripping about chapters. good story line. i appreciate it.
59 is just a number
Get over it. If the author combined this same story into 29 chapters, would that make you happier? Why?
Keep the story flowing!
I love this story...keep it coming!
To those critics complaining about the format, that's just your opinion. I and many others like reading the short story format. If you don't like it, go elsewhere.
120 or more
is fine with me. Just keep letting us share in these lives that you write about so well.
I agree...
with April...
Another one
Fantastic finishing line, I had to slow down a couple of times myself, what a bomb!
Then, Ashley's line just seals the chapter with a great laugh, well done!
J
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