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Where is YOUR story
Mr. Anonymous... Where is your story? Nobody forced you to read this very entertaining story.
It could be a really hot story if...
...it wasn't so rushed and a little more thought was put into it. You had really good idea but you need to take your time, reread it, pay attention to the flow of the story, and edit when necessary.
Again, really hot idea, almost cum worthy just avoid "Peter Griffin's Laws of Erotica" and you'll do fine next time. ;)
Family fetish fun.
Reads as light hearted incest/fetish story, fast paced.Does what it says on the tin!
Very hot story
Hot read.
Spelling !
short sharp story but work on your spelling THEIR not THIER
This story was amazing, ignore what others said about it cause I loved it !! :P
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