Stubbornness

Love this!!

Creatively sung! I especially love how you wove your cat into your poem, hiding along with your inspiration. (Perhaps your cat is your "mews"? Ok that was just BAD, couldn't resist, sorry). Seriously, after reading your words, one would never guess your muse was in hiding too. Oh, and "Stubborn" is the perfect title! :)

Well

the muse didn't stay away long, (A5) hope you got your cat back, pregnant, 'cause the muse is.

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Four.

poignant and written with admirable restraint. very nice

visual

conjures up a picture perfectly, a very atomsperic vignette

damned good lines!

Our old house was finally empty except
for our cat who hid and
my muse who kept him company
amidst the dustballs and the bits of lost toys,


just want to let you know I enjoy your work immensely. always have and always will. Sorry I haven't been around to read you, having computer problems. Keep up the good work!!

~ maria