In More Ways Than One Ch. 03

Sounds

Like Drama is coming into their lives at Break neck speed.

Psychotherapist is now open

Each of the characters has major flaws and warped values. This is a train wreck approaching at breakneck speed and everyone is along for warp ride. On that note will you be posting soon????

Good but......

would definitely be better if you had an editor. With that said, next chapter looks like the sh*& is gonna hit the fan - looking forward to it!!

hmmm

I like the series so far but your cliff hangers are killing me.
Your story is solid just get an editor to tweak it.

*****

Hmmmm.... Good

The characters are very intriguing and there is a lot of potential for the story.... I am looking out for your next chapter.... Longer chapters would really be MUCH better!!!!!! Please don't keep us waiting loong

well now

i don't like cheating/cheaters, loathe it, in fact. BUT! I don't feel sympathy for Cian b/c he's put girlie through IT, with very little regard to her feelings. that being said, sleeping with Aidan isn't the best of ideas either. and what is aidan up to? i mean sleeping with your bud's girl, even if she is quickly being turned into the side piece? with?

Great story, looking forward to the next chapter!

Want more....

Want more soon.....

finally

i hope they get caught only because then the story with be forced to develope a bit more and not have the chance to loop itslef plus i want to see more intetaction between cian and keya and we would get an inkling into cian and aiden true relationship i mean dies he not know what cian really does or is aiden so sure he'll gove up keya that it doesnt matter?

overall yummy good only dnt make us wait. to long for the next one please

*****

Interesting possibilities.

Five.

cant wait for more

cant wait for more

Intriguing.....

Can't wait how this comes out.

Hmmmmm...

Whatever happened to "Bros before Hoes"?

SWEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!! Finally!!!!!!

Should we feel sorry for Cian??? I'm thinkin' HELL to the NO!!!
Once again why can't men be straight? If you aren't straight you open the door to all kinds of bullshit.
I love that his own friend betrayed him....so damn righteous!!
For the record she is NOT the WHORE!!! He is. The whore for daddy's dollars...got it????

names.

Its coming along a little better but the mistakes with the names are the problem. say Cian when you mean aiden and so on. the story seemed a little jumbled and rushed but as chapters go on its getting a little better. but the rushing and name mistakes is what gets me a little lost.

Cian is so wrong

More please