by rpsuch
I diligently check the new list daily for certain series and this one is at the top of the list. I love it. Keep up the good work. When it is finished, it would be awesome to somehow get a pdf version to download.
What a perfect story for the first night of Pesach! Now, if I could figure out how to work it into tomorrow night's seder.....
I did work it into the seder. Before Moses led them into the Red Sea, Ashley led them into the seder in chapter 61.
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It will be a little while before there are any more chapters posted because I need to be sure 62-67 work before I finish 68. As always they will be posted on my site before they appear here.
another wonderful chapter; a continuation worth waiting for, and a tale that is pure pleasure.
RPS now that Jeff is becoming a big shot in education Papa Fine doesn't know what to do or say. Great chapter as usual,ciao.
has a better sense of direction than Moses did! We will wait patiently for the next postings. I hope it's not 40 years.
Your development of chracters and the ability to move the story along and still add twists and turns is amazing. Bravo!