Well done, CS. I like this story a lot. You've shown us who these people are and what is going on in their lives before any hide-the-salami happens. As a reader I appreciate having a good sense for the characters so I can place what is going on between them in a context, and you've done that very, very well here.
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Anonymous06/09/11
SO HOT
Love it, love the lack of sexism.. makes it so much hotter than some of the shit stories on here. Keep it up!
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Outstanding story
Thanks you for this story. I love the explosive chemistry between the two!
Good Story
Well done, CS. I like this story a lot. You've shown us who these people are and what is going on in their lives before any hide-the-salami happens. As a reader I appreciate having a good sense for the characters so I can place what is going on between them in a context, and you've done that very, very well here.
BB
SO HOT
Love it, love the lack of sexism.. makes it so much hotter than some of the shit stories on here. Keep it up!
Convincing and arousing writing...
Like the best stories, it was so real I was there...
Thank you. I look forward to more.
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