Holy hell! That is all I can say. I am so glad that Rayne went to Gard and they were asble to talk some and then for her to know that she is immune to the bites of vampires and not telling him first heat of the moment kinda thing huh. But I think they seem to be on a road to rediscovering what they have long missed from each other but ow that they are mated they will have yrs to rediscover all those yr apart Im sure! That was a great great ch and I loved the talk between her and Dayton also!
From the very beginning I have loved all of your characters, but I can honestly say that Gard and Demitri are my all time favorites ... for now! If only they lived down the street from me I would be in Heaven.
Someone should create a support group for your readers, someplace where we can talk about our addiction.
My name is Kristina, and I am a serious Jaz junkie
by
Anonymous04/19/11
WOW!
Just...wow! You are amazing!! I've been checking in this whole day (lol) and you can imagine my squeal of delight at seeing that the new chapter had posted! I was blown away by Freya finally admitting to someone her love for Dayton and by Sarayne's capacity to forgive and love! This chapter was a treat to read! Thank you Jaz!
`god you sure know how to emotionally drain someone. what an excellent chapter. i will have to write you a letter after i get my emotions and my spinning mind back under control thank you for posting this story
Once I cleared away the soggy eyes, and located a tissue I was fine. Good god Jaz your going to make me look like even more of a softy than I already am.
Holy cow that was a heck of a chapter, I am going to say its way up there for me probably second best to a chapter in FTI I can't remember right now.
^_^, because I can't force my self to say nothing other than ^_^ i will have to settle for an amazing chapter that fulfills at least two of them and still leaves more. still recovering from how awesomely written, and edited, this chapter was.
once again you have left me speechless. i could accually feel her hurt. oh and i love her name. Sarayne. i think i might even use it one day if i have a girl. with yuhr permission of course.(although i would spell it just as my middle name is spelt. so Saraine
&: i do agree with everyone below me. Sheesh you have a powerful way with words. Glad i started reading yuhr Saga. Yuhr amazing. keep up the good work Jaz.
It was pure magic, I cried at their pain and then cried at their joy. Damn are you sure you don't get a commision from Kleenex. Absolutely loved it. I did think being a hybrid the vamp venom wouldn't hurt her so glad I was right. Now they need to get to the compound before Dayton starts wondering where she went. Now we still have one couple left who need to be mated. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Rafe will be surprised when he feels Gard is now one of his pack. LOL He should be able to reasure Dayton when he tells his Alpha that Rayne is gone that he knows who she is with. LOL
what you do to me on a weekly basis when you update this story *wipes eyes*......but i wouldn't give it up for the world....thank you again Jaz for another breathtaking chapter!
OMG.....This was absolutely brilliant Jazz. No wonder you are the best writer of time. I'm so excited and angry that only 5 chaps are remaining, I dont know how to react. I love your writing.
You did great wid Gard & Sarayne. Now Dayton and Freya are left from mating. It would be very exciting to read about them. Every couple you created were beautiful Jaz, but still I like Caleb & Annie the most, then Andrie & Loretta.
Just a request Jaz that please make there last 5 chap extremely spicey and hot.
What an amazing story this is becoming! You are such a talented writer, able to weave and interweave the characters and their uniqueness into a story that has become one of the best I have read. I can't wait for the rest of the series.
Maybe it is not torture but greed on my part. I want all of this so I can see the ending but at the same time I wonder what you have in mind for the next saga.The big question though is the wolfe gene made the male vampires capable of being a father will it make the female vampire capable of being a mother.
Any way thank you for sharing your talent with us and if you can post faster lol.
Mike from Texas
Famous last words from many infamous people. Since this one is going to last longer than TC from what I've heard, I guess a lot will go wrong. I can't wait.
In awe of you.
Best chapter yet.
That's saying something.
Brain hurts.
So much to say.
No words come to mind.
Well two.
Mindboggling.
Brilliant.
That's all.
Zooey.
by
Anonymous04/19/11
YAY!!!
I am so happy Gard and Sarayne are finally mated... Can't wait for Dayton and Freya!!! YOU ROCK JAZ!!!
All I have to say, is...once again, you amaze me with your gift! I'm not looking forward to this series ending, and yet I can't wait for the finished product! (What a contradiction if there ever was one!)
I'm so happy Rayne went to Gard :) I really thought she was gonna succeed in running away.. again
Thank you for giving me the best break ever from my studies!
Jaz you rock!
two more chapters next time would help me a bit, i'm used to reading ur stuff in one day, but i've finally come for a live story, and its so bothersome cause i read REALLY fast! update agian plz!!!! and very soon
by
Anonymous04/19/11
Great !!!
Every word was just great . Loved this chapter . Cant wait to read the next.
do you keep writing such emotional chapters? You are far to young to have experienced all of the things you write about, yet they are written with what feels like first hand knowledge. You have been blessed with an ability that even alot of published authors don't have.
After reading other comments, I find that like myself, your fans all get something from each chapter. We all walk away almost better people after reading one of your chapters. You make us think about other people rather than just ourselves. You show us all sides of an issue, make us see that not everything is as black and white as it often appears. It is almost like you challenge me to be a better person.
Okay this probably makes no sense to you. There she goes again rambling. Not this time. I really do feel enlightened after reading your stories and almost feel the need to challenge myself to be a better person. Never did I think a story about Vamps and Weres would have any effect on my other than entertainment. Again I ask you Jaz, how the hell do you do it!
by
Anonymous04/19/11
Jaz for World Peace
A beautiful and emotional chapter. Really. Both stories: Day and Freya, Rayne and Gard. The accumlative pain in all of their stories could possibly have powered a nuclear bomb, but your sweet story has slowly been dissipating this with love and compassion. Yes, pass the sick bucket some might say. But ultimately what do people really want? I would say, most, ultimately would want a happy ending (for everything - not just this story).
So, Jaz for World Peace, lol!
I've said before that I love Freya (She is definitely my favourite character) - I love her even more now. She's trying so hard!
I was a little surprised at the speed with which Rayne and Gard got together again after the trauma of the last chapter, but you've got to love them - they are perfect together.
I'm one of those morbid people that love reading about pain. I had this fantasy that she would never really forgive him, and the would spend the rest of eternity playing cat and mouse. Every now and again he would catch her and they would have a fantastic night and she would slip away in the morning. I am also growing to hate Caleb and Rihanna. They seem like intruders at the compound to me.
I got to the end and I just burst out laughing. A thought popped into my head. Is Rafe going to tell Gard to stand like he did the other vamps? That thought just tickled me for some reason.
English
Love love love it
Freaking awesome
Just amazing!
Again wonderful! I just can't wait for the new chapters.
Holy hell! That is all I can say. I am so glad that Rayne went to Gard and they were asble to talk some and then for her to know that she is immune to the bites of vampires and not telling him first heat of the moment kinda thing huh. But I think they seem to be on a road to rediscovering what they have long missed from each other but ow that they are mated they will have yrs to rediscover all those yr apart Im sure! That was a great great ch and I loved the talk between her and Dayton also!
*sigh*
absolutely beautiful..... you sure can emotionally drain a person ;)
20 minutes...
That's how long I have been sitting here trying to organise my emotions enough to leave comment. This was just......
Speechless...
Yeah... What lostchicken said...
Fantastic as usual!!!
From the very beginning I have loved all of your characters, but I can honestly say that Gard and Demitri are my all time favorites ... for now! If only they lived down the street from me I would be in Heaven.
Someone should create a support group for your readers, someplace where we can talk about our addiction.
My name is Kristina, and I am a serious Jaz junkie
WOW!
Just...wow! You are amazing!! I've been checking in this whole day (lol) and you can imagine my squeal of delight at seeing that the new chapter had posted! I was blown away by Freya finally admitting to someone her love for Dayton and by Sarayne's capacity to forgive and love! This chapter was a treat to read! Thank you Jaz!
N.M.A
you know how to wreck someone emotions
`god you sure know how to emotionally drain someone. what an excellent chapter. i will have to write you a letter after i get my emotions and my spinning mind back under control thank you for posting this story
Once I cleared away the soggy eyes, and located a tissue I was fine. Good god Jaz your going to make me look like even more of a softy than I already am.
Holy cow that was a heck of a chapter, I am going to say its way up there for me probably second best to a chapter in FTI I can't remember right now.
.....
^_^, because I can't force my self to say nothing other than ^_^ i will have to settle for an amazing chapter that fulfills at least two of them and still leaves more. still recovering from how awesomely written, and edited, this chapter was.
BLOWED AWAY
WOW ,what a chapter ,u are one good writer ,you just know how to keep you reader on the edge and wanting more.......keep the good work up.
ps :just know that the coming chapter are ticking bomb just waiting to blow you readers away.
thank you..
once again you have left me speechless. i could accually feel her hurt. oh and i love her name. Sarayne. i think i might even use it one day if i have a girl. with yuhr permission of course.(although i would spell it just as my middle name is spelt. so Saraine
thankyou prt2:
since apparently my comment was downsized lOl.
&: i do agree with everyone below me. Sheesh you have a powerful way with words. Glad i started reading yuhr Saga. Yuhr amazing. keep up the good work Jaz.
-Aiyanna Raine
Wonderful chapter!
It was pure magic, I cried at their pain and then cried at their joy. Damn are you sure you don't get a commision from Kleenex. Absolutely loved it. I did think being a hybrid the vamp venom wouldn't hurt her so glad I was right. Now they need to get to the compound before Dayton starts wondering where she went. Now we still have one couple left who need to be mated. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Purr-fect!
At last! Only 3000 years in the making! I can't wait to see Dayton claim Freya!
You complete me!!!
You had me at Bite Me!!! Sniff Sniff!!! Sob Sob!!! Hickup!!! Show Me The Next Chapter!!!!! Your HHIC!!!!!
BTW
Rafe will be surprised when he feels Gard is now one of his pack. LOL He should be able to reasure Dayton when he tells his Alpha that Rayne is gone that he knows who she is with. LOL
you have no idea......
what you do to me on a weekly basis when you update this story *wipes eyes*......but i wouldn't give it up for the world....thank you again Jaz for another breathtaking chapter!
YAY!
another 5-star installment! Glad Freya's making progress, and Sarayne / Gard's reconciliation was just beautifully written. best makeup sex ever ;)
brilliantastic
OMG.....This was absolutely brilliant Jazz. No wonder you are the best writer of time. I'm so excited and angry that only 5 chaps are remaining, I dont know how to react. I love your writing.
You did great wid Gard & Sarayne. Now Dayton and Freya are left from mating. It would be very exciting to read about them. Every couple you created were beautiful Jaz, but still I like Caleb & Annie the most, then Andrie & Loretta.
Just a request Jaz that please make there last 5 chap extremely spicey and hot.
O
Absolutely astounding!!
What an amazing story this is becoming! You are such a talented writer, able to weave and interweave the characters and their uniqueness into a story that has become one of the best I have read. I can't wait for the rest of the series.
Best chapter yet!
Such a good little kitty!!!
I adored this chapter Jaz, great work!!
Thanks
Maybe it is not torture but greed on my part. I want all of this so I can see the ending but at the same time I wonder what you have in mind for the next saga.The big question though is the wolfe gene made the male vampires capable of being a father will it make the female vampire capable of being a mother.
Any way thank you for sharing your talent with us and if you can post faster lol.
Mike from Texas
Great chapter
Awesome chapter Jaz. So glad that Gard and Rayne finally mated. This chapter is the best one yet.
mieow
purrrrr....fect.Need I say more?
How could anything go wrong?
Famous last words from many infamous people. Since this one is going to last longer than TC from what I've heard, I guess a lot will go wrong. I can't wait.
Just enough
of everything, well balanced, moved along well. Looking forward to more.
Hmmmmm...
Awsome. Just fricken awsome. Thank you!!
*squeals like a girl*
Fan-freaking-tastic!!!!!
BRILLIANT!
In awe of you.
Best chapter yet.
That's saying something.
Brain hurts.
So much to say.
No words come to mind.
Well two.
Mindboggling.
Brilliant.
That's all.
Zooey.
YAY!!!
I am so happy Gard and Sarayne are finally mated... Can't wait for Dayton and Freya!!! YOU ROCK JAZ!!!
You make me proud! Being completely addicted to your work is an utter satisfaction in my life! Wonderful chapter and beautifullly writing.
Delicius!
There is no other word to describe it. :)
pleeaasssee!!!!
pleeaasseee don't let me wait too long on the next chapter.I think you should post 2 chapters next time too easy the longing.
awesome
even if two chapters were posted at the same time it still wouldnt be enough and we would still be moaning that we want more.
oh by the way did i say i want more!!! :)
love all your stories, i check continuously for updates
All I have to say, is...once again, you amaze me with your gift! I'm not looking forward to this series ending, and yet I can't wait for the finished product! (What a contradiction if there ever was one!)
Amazing!!!
Jaz! You really are the best. Wonderful chapter. :) And thank you for writing fast.... write faster. hahahaha....
Easily 5 stars again. :)
I'm so happy Rayne went to Gard :) I really thought she was gonna succeed in running away.. again
Thank you for giving me the best break ever from my studies!
Jaz you rock!
i agree
two more chapters next time would help me a bit, i'm used to reading ur stuff in one day, but i've finally come for a live story, and its so bothersome cause i read REALLY fast! update agian plz!!!! and very soon
Great !!!
Every word was just great . Loved this chapter . Cant wait to read the next.
How
do you keep writing such emotional chapters? You are far to young to have experienced all of the things you write about, yet they are written with what feels like first hand knowledge. You have been blessed with an ability that even alot of published authors don't have.
After reading other comments, I find that like myself, your fans all get something from each chapter. We all walk away almost better people after reading one of your chapters. You make us think about other people rather than just ourselves. You show us all sides of an issue, make us see that not everything is as black and white as it often appears. It is almost like you challenge me to be a better person.
Okay this probably makes no sense to you. There she goes again rambling. Not this time. I really do feel enlightened after reading your stories and almost feel the need to challenge myself to be a better person. Never did I think a story about Vamps and Weres would have any effect on my other than entertainment. Again I ask you Jaz, how the hell do you do it!
Jaz for World Peace
A beautiful and emotional chapter. Really. Both stories: Day and Freya, Rayne and Gard. The accumlative pain in all of their stories could possibly have powered a nuclear bomb, but your sweet story has slowly been dissipating this with love and compassion. Yes, pass the sick bucket some might say. But ultimately what do people really want? I would say, most, ultimately would want a happy ending (for everything - not just this story).
So, Jaz for World Peace, lol!
I've said before that I love Freya (She is definitely my favourite character) - I love her even more now. She's trying so hard!
I was a little surprised at the speed with which Rayne and Gard got together again after the trauma of the last chapter, but you've got to love them - they are perfect together.
Looking forward to the next installment.
lol
Fx
OMFG!
Stunned, speechless, and in tears.
Tereasa
Loved it but....
I'm one of those morbid people that love reading about pain. I had this fantasy that she would never really forgive him, and the would spend the rest of eternity playing cat and mouse. Every now and again he would catch her and they would have a fantastic night and she would slip away in the morning. I am also growing to hate Caleb and Rihanna. They seem like intruders at the compound to me.
Another great chapter.
I got to the end and I just burst out laughing. A thought popped into my head. Is Rafe going to tell Gard to stand like he did the other vamps? That thought just tickled me for some reason.
Awesome!!
You totalllly rock hun, loved this chapter even those i didn't need tissues for it, can't wait for the next chapter keep up the excellent work.
Donna
Merci
I can't find the words to express my feelings.......trying to find them will be a waste of effort. Thank you for this!
Frikin' Outstanding
Jaz,
Damn you hit it out of the park again. I am soooooo hoooked on this story. Can't wait for the next chapter
Amazing
Your stories are the only ones I ever comment...hehe
I love them so much I just have to take the time to show my appreciation!
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