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The Flowers

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone04/17/11

for what its worth

in my opin, (which is heavily discounted in some quarters) this is the best of seen from you, I like, I just don't feel like going into the reasons why. A hearty 5!

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by SweetOblivion04/17/11

shades of wild willy barrett

and his beware of the flowers of long ago. Nice. S.O.

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by bulltlr04/18/11

5

The bees will dance a war dance,
with wolf fangs in their dreams.

being highly allergic to bees this makes me shudder...
I liked this very much!

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by Tristesse204/19/11

OK......

......flowers should be left to grow in their natural surroundings or beware. I love this poem. No wasted words. A flower in its own right.

Tess

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