Orphan Ch. 01

Welcome Home

You have been missed. Am enjoying your story..write on!

Please continue quickly.

I cannot begin to express how good this beginning has been to read. You are so amazingly talented. Please hurry with the next installment.

Great story

Very well written. I'm looking forward to the next instalment!

Whoa!

A very interesting story. I'm curious as to why this is in 'Nonhuman' though. I'll wait to see what happens next.

excellent start

excellent start can not wait for the story to continue

I love it.

Maybe your absence ,has given the motivation to something new? An I love it. I read a lot of nonhuman stories, This is great,but please do not turn this into a novel. I know other readers do love them, but life is short and I like to find out the ending before I drop dead. Do not want to offend anybody, that s just me. But still , can not wait for the next chapter.

what a nice start! will definitely be waiting for the next chapter. (just don't forget the other two ;-) )

WOW

Great start to what I hope is a long story.

Woa

amazing start! cant wait till the next chapter love it

very nice

I will be watching for new chapters. I really like yur writing style. Can not wait to see where his super strength comes from.

Great Story

What a terrific read! Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter.

Interesting

i love how you wrote this first chapter and will be looking for more to come...

Donna

Thank you.

Well done. Please continue.

I can't wait to read more of this story!

Amazing Grab

When I'm in the mood for a new read, I look for something that does a grab for my attention right off and then keeps going. You've got the grab. Keep it coming!

Great Stiory

This is a great story, I can feel the emotions of the character as I read. Great Job!!!!! Can't wait for the next installment.

Great

This was a great start can't wait to read more. gaelicvampire

please please please please

Please please please more this chapter just snagged me and I can't wait for the next chapter

Great job!

Definitely will put this story in my favorites. A few typos, but other than that, I didn't see any mistakes. Interesting story line...I can already see there is going to be serious drama in the future. ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo-Lily

Interesting.

I wonder what they all are. He seems to be like them. He's definitely odd but still very likable. I'm assuming he and Jena will become an item. She might be just what he needs to heal emotionally. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Well written!

You have really made Dane come alive. I'll be watching for more.

This has the makings of an excellent new series

This segment was excellent and really has left me wondering how soon you will release the next issue.

Great work.

Thanks

You have made my day!....

First you put out the first chapter of a new story (which I love!) and to add the icing to the cake...you have Alexander riding through one of the prettiest areas I've ever ridden myself! I've ridden my Harley through Cody, WY and up through Red Lodge, MT on my way to Glacier National Park (the long way, from Virginia). :-) So to say the least, I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes from here! Great work!!!

Ohmigooods!

I lovelovelove this story!

I know it's just going to absolutely kill me once you finally bring this fabulous story to a thrilling and oh-so satisfying conclusion (which hopefully won't be for a longlonglooong time).

I await with bated breath for your next chapter.

Hope

I hope you will be adding more to this story soon. Thanks for a good read.

!

I HATE stumbling on to Ch 1 of a really great story. Patience may be a virtue but good writing is such a gem I don't want to wait for more. Fortunately I can catch up on your other stories and keep an eye on "Orphan".

please

More this is already the fifth time I've read this chapter.

Still waiting!

Its been too long..need a chapter or few

Quite a good start

only one question. How did the fuel so suddenly ignite? Is this the Hollywood Multiverse?

Thank you for this series, this is just amazing. Don't stop writing please.

Loved it!

Just starting out in this story and already hooked from the first chapter.

You've captured Alexander's wanderlust and inner loneliness exceptionally well. I just know there's more to him than meets the eye and am looking forward to discovering what it is.

You have a great writing style. Can't wait to read more :-)

@Kolrin

You've obviously not been around many wrecks friend... Fuel doesn't even need a good reason to suddenly explode... Many different things can set it off in a heartbeat... It is entirely believable that it would suddenly explode like that...

why not finish dragon clan

i read it from the beginning why you stop ?

Do not stop

Please why did you stop orphan I love the story please..................!!!!!!!!!!!!

NO ENDING,,AGAIN

NO ENDING TO STORIES SEEMS TO BE A COMMON THEME WITH THIS WRITER..Have started 3 stories,all with no endings,and as they are posted in 2008,,,an ending is doubtful.....

I love this story!

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Thanks for posting!

OK, I'm hooked

time to see where this leads.

abandon hope all ye who enter here

of the 20 projected chapters the author projected in this series they ended at 10. No resolution. No completion. No word. No hope.
unless you are feeling masochistic save yourselves the frustration and stop now, just as the author has.

It is the series I most want to see finished

because it is SO good. Even knowing there isn't an ending, I can't help but read it.

Still checking back

Once or twice a year I come back and reread this great story hoping that he will come back and finish it someday. Most stories once they do not update for a year I just forget about but this one is good enough to keep me hoping.

Thanks for the warnings!

Was seeeming to be good, then I seen the comments. Uuuuggghhh!!!

Continuation Writer

I'm a continuation writer, if I get enough feedback - my email contact is on the site on my bio - then i'll start this one up
JC