i liked this story hope you continue...
If only reality could live up to the fantasy this story inspires!!!
Nice job, well done.
roflmao....hilarious...my favorite line. Good story, I liked your first one better. Keep up the good work.
a little humor in your tale loved it
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that was cute
i liked this story hope you continue...
If only
If only reality could live up to the fantasy this story inspires!!!
Good, Cute and Hot
Nice job, well done.
It was like giving a box of chocolates to a diabetic.
roflmao....hilarious...my favorite line. Good story, I liked your first one better. Keep up the good work.
ok tale
a little humor in your tale loved it
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