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by wildsweetone04/20/11

soup

i enjoyed this poem. i like the sparseness and your word choice feels right for the thick broth consequences. food for thought - would it make any difference (better or worse?) if the last two words were reversed?

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by tazz31709/13/12

DESCRIBING THE NEW MEDS

naming them for posterity TK U MLJ LV NV

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