My Personal Alarm Clock

keep going!

Isn't it Tuesday afternoon yet? Next chapter please!

Thank you

I couldn't have asked for a more positive first comment to my first ever submitted story/chapter. I hope others find my writing and storylines as enjoyable.

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more please!!

oh wow. great beginning...

TEASE

now this is the type of teaser they need to have

Wow !!

Excellent start, very well written. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment. Could this be the perfect alarm call?

This was awesome keep going!

Good first story

Really enjoyed it. Well written, grabbed my interest and is clearly building to something. Looking forward to more. I'm glad mom has big, heavy, saggy tits.

Incredible

What a first story!

I hope you really let all members of this family explore each other!

A good start

A very kinky storyline, and I'll be watching for chapter two.

Sure got my attention!

I am eleventh to comment so far - and every one before me is lavish with praise - even grumpy old Anonymous. Wow. Don't know if I have ever seen that before. MF looks like a future prize winner -

A great story!

Just how many boys do you suppose would love to have a personal alarm clock like that? Their own mother's warn wet mouth on their big stiff prick? And then they blow their young balls down their mother's throat? Probably more than a few, I think.