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Good
Maybe not as steamy as the first chapter, but still thoroughly engaging. I hope you continue: It's nice having something to look forward to.
Awesome
Your really good....Keep writing cause i cant wait to see what happens next :):)
Excellent Chapter
Madam, you have warmed my heart this morning! I have been watching for this since the last chapter. I personally cannot wait to read about the first time big brother sees these two together! I was okay with the lack of steamy in this chapter. The story line is perfect. Oh, and who wouldn't love a guy wanting to break his leg before games on the road for you! Lol. Thanks again for making my morning!
Wonderful. Tender & funny, well written. Look forward to reading more of your work
Love this story
Your writing is like a great gourmet meal after trying to stay full for weeks on nothing but cotton candy and jelly beans. More please.
Love it!
Jason is going to flip when he finds out. No brother wants his best friend banging his sister. But they are so great together!! I love it!
keep going
Keep going, I want to take this journey!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm looking forward to the fireworks when Jason finds out who his sister's seeing :)
Gorgeous!
This is just beautiful. I love how the story is progressing, and at just the right pace. Thank you for another lovely chapter. :)
Yes
What can I say, its better then the first and driving me to the next. Thanks - Kevin
Prediction
at a guess, and i swear i havent read ahead, im gonna say rory is that o'brian guy.
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