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Well maybe, just maybe, you'll give us a shoot out to the death with the evil minions of Center Corp....
Just dreaming, but again, thanks for the enjoyable story. I eagarly read every one of your new postings.
Great story
Another great story. I look forward to the next one
Good but a little confused
You messed up with all the greats, like saying Chante was Williams great great grandma, but she was just his grandma with no greats. Enjoying the story but that section was confused.
Great chapter !
love this chapter and am waiting on next wonderful chapter. Keepem comin. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
I enjoy the writing style
A little bit of history, whether it true or not, doesn't really make any difference, but the imagination or knowledge, which ever it is, of the time and location of the past is very interesting.
As for the future, well anytime there are lawyers involved, it's going to be messy.
Eliminate Josh's son, the man that's fighting the will, and all of the fuss will be solved.
Thanks for the read.
Chante's command of English
is commendable. I do believe, though, that the teaching at that time was far more strict about the proper use of pronouns than is accepted in 2011. Since her writing used sophisticated words, it likely would have used "I" and "me" correctly, even if she didn't use proper paragraphs. My grandfather, born in 1889, was not hesitant to point out a mistake if I made it, and his education was limited to elementary school.
this series is addictive
I think (hope) it is all coming to a boil soon.
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