All Comments on 'Mary's Naked Camp Adventure Ch. 02'

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BarbaraBarbaraabout 13 years ago
Reluctant Exhibitionism excells! Worth a 5 vote this time?

Superbly executed plot, gradually divesting Mary of sexual inhibitions, in a most realistic way! All that's left is a pubic bush to hide her charms?

Her adventurous girl-friends intend to fix that problem, before too long?

austin_voyaustin_voyabout 13 years ago
Fun story

this is a fun little story. Sometimes a little too slow in its pacing, though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
You wrote, "...pressing her hands against her breast to hide the embarrassing reveal of her underwear.

"Reveal" is a verb, not a noun, except in an architectural usage. Fucking moron!

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