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by twelveoone04/19/11

Bronze

you do know this is prose? And while I do see the "power of the threes" in abundance
There she was and there I was and there we were,
Where goes the reader?
while life is such a sad song and sadder still,
will make you a million on C&W jukeboxes, 'cause you do have the girl, gone, throw in a dawg, cinched.
In short throw in some zingers if you're gonna do monologues.
I liked the last two lines, but not enough to vote.

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