things just got very interesting! Well written, as always, and so sweet.
this, its so tender and sweet and i dont know what is going to happen and i like that about the tale, Cant wait for the next chapter.
This is getting even better I wish Adriel could explain his grief but the fun is in the reading onto the next chapter...
I was really getting into the story then they randomly have sex...it doesn't really make sense. Too hurried and not enough build up.
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Ah...
things just got very interesting! Well written, as always, and so sweet.
loving
this, its so tender and sweet and i dont know what is going to happen and i like that about the tale, Cant wait for the next chapter.
This is getting even better I wish Adriel could explain his grief but the fun is in the reading onto the next chapter...
Random...
I was really getting into the story then they randomly have sex...it doesn't really make sense. Too hurried and not enough build up.
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